All Comments on 'Leader of the Pack Ch. 19'

the plot is still going well... it felt a little ..um... 'compressed' here, not rushed so much but as if you're trying to speed it along by skipping the details. Clearly you were excited to publish this chapter because the spelling and typos were awful this time. LOL - still, one of the best serial stories on the site.

thanks so much for sharing.

Tá grá agam duit secretme : )))) keep going .. I love this story and kinda addicted it ... You are my favourite writer after Danielle : )))

This story never disappoints or fails to surprise me in some way. I love that you weave in the humor as well as the tragedies. Keith makes me laugh, and I'm really glad you came back around to include Celia and Mack. I'm curious to see how the situation with Jenna and the books wraps up, but it's all just awesome. Thank you for sharing your story!

lol im absolutely loving this i was so happy to see that you posted the 19 chapter i seriously tore through all the other ones in two days i love it its so enticing and mind blowing did i mention how much i love it lol you have a great talent with writing =] cant wait for the chapters to follow <3 Mercedes

Well, That was a marathon read. All 19 chapters and the preceding story in one sitting. I love the story line and eagerly await the next installment. Happy hollidays.

I really liked that Aislinn's grandmother is not totally gone from her life. I know she will need Brinah's knowledge in order to figure out how to stop Jenna's plan from fruition.<br><br>

Another nice touch was Aislinn helping to reconcile Celia and Mack. This has been such a great read, from the very beginning. And it's definitely one I will re-read

For another brilliant chapter, i cant wait for the next one. Keep up the supurb work.

Great job - a lot more please!

of this book. keep it up!

This is the best story i have read here to date thank you so very much for writing it the more you write the more I shall read an yes I am still with you I have even went back an reread the other chapters a few times I can not get enough of this.

this is one of the best stories I Have read anywhere and I am a book worm,,this is an amazing story I can't wait for more..keep going..it's perfect.

Great chapter. She's getting better all the time. At the rate you're going it looks like you may make 300000 words before you finish this there is still so much story to tell.

I'm not a publisher, just a reader, but I love your story line. My girlfriend owns a used book store and I get to read a little of everything I want. I have paid hard earned dollars for books not as well thought out or as entertaining. The highest compliment I can give is if it was published I would buy it.

it's so so good and there's still a lot to explore. I hope you're not getting bored with it. I look forward to every chapter. Great to see Brinah back!

I am completely hooked! Keep up the great work and update soon :)

with christmas so didn't get to read this till now and MAN it was a KILLER wait!! I can't believe it and I LOVE IT!!

for sticking with this story for this long. i enjoy reading it immensely

Wow, 225 pages. I can't believe it! No wonder I have been neglecting the rest of my life to read it LOL. Thanks for the hard work.

I loved the fact that Brinah was brought back into it!

I still want a glossary for the gaelic.

Question: what relation is Sarah to Cullen. Sister was referred to and then one time he said mother which confused me.

Anyhow, the whole run and sex scene here was very hot.

Overall, the whole story continues to be great!

I like that they can read each others minds since they don't have stupid misunderstandings anymore!

Keep it coming.

love the story, i keep reading even though i should be sleeping

I am really enjoying this story. I would suggest some translation of the Gaelic as an end note to the chapter and perhaps a pronunciation guide. This way at the end, I can figure out exactly what they said and how they said it. I understand that it would ruin the moment if you placed it in the reading, and I figure it would ruin the suspense if you placed it in the beginning but also several messages could be construed in these phrases besides I love you or you're my heart or whatever exactly the Phrase means.

Thanks I would appreciate it.

:)

After all the work you put into this story, this one line has just about ruined the whole thing for me.

"Aislinn turned on him. "Mack, I can't believe you'd put so much effort into trying to get her attention and then when you have it you'd turn into a creep.""

Why the fuck is it okay for every fucking female in this story to have self doubts and insecurities, but when one of them does one of the most devastating things a partner can do to another one - calling out another males name at that crucial, most intimate moment - a negative reaction from the male, causes Aislinn (probably the most insecure wench in the whole fucking story) to quote the above line?

It fucked the whole story for me. All that fucking effort... how fucking irritating. Such a shame to piss this story off after so long...

Anonymous should look at the big picture, Aislinn knew facts that Mack did not. Celia regreted saying the Alphas name, Celia loved Mack, Mack loved Celia and Mack is soon to be a FATHER. While Celia screwed up big time, love requires forgiveness, the makeup sex can be great.

Aislinn knew that by accepting Celia back Mack will benefit now and in the future and she acted to facilitate a reconciliation.

Great story, Thank you for sharing your talent.

Yep! This one's a keeper! Great SEX scenes! Could almost make a hentai out of it! :-) If it wasn't for all this internal dialogue stuff that is...finally...sex...between a dog and cat? Give me a break! At least the human / hybrid part is believably sexy!

Great! Just one thing though....if Aislinn was naked this entire time in front of the others, wouldn't the scar of the bite have been visibile anyway? They didn't need to be careful anymore in front of the others. Cat's already out of the bag.

I wonder where Keith went when the rest of the pack were getting it on in the woods. Haha! 5 stars!

I find that I am questioning myself whether I've turned furry or not. I don't think so. And yet I still keep reading. I think that shows how good this series is. Hmmm.

Enough to get it published as a book.

wow!!!!!!!!

Hun i have to say thank you for lettin me read this for free this is good enough to be a book actually its better its great enough to be a BESTSELLER :).....Gooin n finish read the rest....

xoxo

Aria

Could you put up a set of gaelic translations? So far, there's been no direct translations in character, and I've just been guessing from reading in context.

If you need a translation you can type it into google and it will translate it for you. It's the same as if you had read a word in English you didn't understand, and wanted to use a dictionary.

You should so publish this story. this is the type of stories that I would buy!

.... u have great imagination.....your story makes sex and love and everything part of life and living (the ups and downs) that we can all associate with on a daily basis...