All Comments on 'Legally Binding Ch. 01'

It is interesting how her appointment was for 10:30 yet when she got there was told to wait till her appointment time and went in at exactly 10:00. Little things like that confuse OCD readers.

I will try and correct these Details in future stories thank you for the feedback very much criticism is what helps us improve

Any intelligent submissive insist that a first meeting take place in a public setting and will make arrangements with a friend for a safe call. For all she knew, Elana could intend to harm her; it's also possible that "Elana" could be a man intent on rape. For that matter, from a few emails Elana could have no assurance that Kristin wouldn't hurt her. Letting a stranger into her home is quite foolish. Given all of this, I couldn't get into the story.

Other than this, I found the story to be well written.

Upon rereading myself , it actually says that she is early , and then says she is told to wait until 10 , not until the appointment time. While I admit I did make a mistake in the continuity , the story still works if you really want to get OCD

Well, the entire story is still very lovely.

Kristin is very lucky to receive Miss Elana email and turn up to Miss Elana little pet. I would feel Kristin is very lucky to be in Miss Elana's cage.

I would look forward for the story to be continued :)

You are amazing :)

little princess

Kristin will have a different view of enforcing the law and putting people to jail once she experiences discipline at the hand of Miss Elana who will deeply probe her rational thoughts on crime and punishment. This could be a life changing effect on Kristin.