All Comments on 'Let's Play a Game'

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betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveabout 9 years ago
Nice

This was a great tale. Great for Humor and Satire. A fun read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
still

nothing but a whore

magmamanmagmamanabout 9 years ago
Fun

I got quite a kick out of this one, since my former wife loved Chess. I must have tried 100 times, never managed to beat her. But we never played strip Chess, wish I had thought of that, it might have worked.

A boner tended to break her concentration, with the problem being she wasn't too fussy about whose boner it was.

Thus? Ex wife.

Thanks,

MGM

impo_60impo_60about 9 years ago
I don't like cheaating, but...

I don't like cheaating, but this time I forgot that because this was funny...And a funny story is always worth to read...3*

sugnasugnaabout 9 years ago
Yes She does

She does Cheat

thebuffalothebuffaloabout 9 years ago

Outstanding. Well written. A little different plot. Amusing. What's not to like?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
He knows his wife cheats, . . .

but does he know she's a cheater?

tabbymidnitetabbymidniteabout 9 years ago
erotic and funny

Thank you for writing loved the story, nice twist. really enjoy reading your works always something different...

EspressoBolusEspressoBolusabout 9 years ago
overkill

Having Jake confirm that Erica cheats was lame and too obvious

LickideesplitLickideesplitabout 9 years ago
Delightful

As usual. But this time, Ash's Hero gets skinned. How do you start a wreck in front of Jake?

robertlrobertlover 8 years ago
Loved it

What a great, fun story! And hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Jake had a great day. He got caught in a traffic jam, had to work involuntary overtime and was cuckolded by his wife and his coworker. That's just how things go in Ashson's universe. I really wonder why I take the time to visit there.

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