All Comments on 'Lettie and Piper 03: Girl'

This just gets better and better! I adored the de-personalisation aspect. The way you've turned Piper from a professional, responsible Head teacher into a fuck toy is so hot! Lady Margaret's choreography is perfect, and her insistence on the use of red lipstick I found wonderfully erotic. I'm running out of superlatives to describe your writing Pixie. I'll just have to content myself with awarding this 5 stars.

Oh wow, so many wonderful memories come flooding back to me.

My poor old heart was racing as I watched in my mind's eye entertaining themselves and Lady Margaret. And Piper sitting on her knees, next to her Mistress's Mistress. The order of things, and don't you dare cum Pixie......eeeerrrr Piper

Thank you, so much Olwen. It seems to have hit the spot - I am so pleased xxxxx

Wow!!! That was intensely erotic. And the psychological cliffhanger was perfect: What does Piper really want??? Lady Margaret is really putting Piper to the test - and very intentionally, it would appear. I’m delightfully apprehensive, and anxious to see how things progress from here. Time to restock the popcorn supply. 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿

So glad your popcorn supply held out, Anon. You will have to wait a couple of days to see where it goes next xxxxx

While outrageously graphic the scenes lacked erotic tension/feeling — mechanical, depersonalized sex tells us a story, which of course leads us to the closing question. Nothing subtle in this storyline.

Depersonalization, humiliation, servitude, cuckqueaning, orgasm denial enforced by a chastity belt, oh my.

Lady Margaret seems to know exactly what Piper craves. Or did Lettie share her girlfriend's desires with her Mistress, while they were out in the sexshop buying the necessary items?

At least they call her Girl and not Thing. However, I would have added a vow of silence to the vow of chastity, for the sake of protecting her anonymity, lest she be identified by voice. Being allowed to only whisper to Lettie and Margaret and make unintelligible noises otherwise would have pushed the humiliation even further.

I wonder whether Girl would be able to orgasm in chastity by willpower alone, since she almost orgasmed earlier without touching herself, just from kissing cunt-flavored Lettie on the mouth.

But perhaps the moment has passed, and Girl-cum Piper now entered a moment of self-reflection. What does she really want? Being pushed deeper into submission or snap out of it? Hopefully we shall find out soon.

Thank you, Migbird. That is, we shall have to hope, the message that Piper gets - if she doesn't, she is lost xxxxx

Thank you, Amadeus. You pose the big question - and we shall have to see how Piper answers it. xxxxx

Skillfully crafted!

The power dynamics are palpable and arousing.

The sex play is lusty.

The characters are relatable.

I am enjoying this, especially since Piper must now reconcile her untouchable aching wet pussy with her uncertainty about her true desires and needs!

Thank you so much Paul. I am glad you see the dynamics so clearly, and as you say, the next part will be critical xxxx

This is possibly the hottest thing I have ever read. But just to make sure, I'll be reading it again. And again. And again. Probably with the door locked so no-one will see me appreciating it as it deserves to be appreciated. 5 gold stars Pixie darling and a very wet pair of knickers to go with them xxxxx

Well, well, well. Piper, sorry Girl, was well and truly put in her place in this chapter, and seemed to love every minute of it! Now that she's locked up too, this really is a test of her true fantasies.

Did it all happen rather suddenly and a bit abruptly? Yes, but this is fantasy. And what a delightful fantasy at that.

Really enjoying this one. Can't wait to see what's in store for for Piper next. Hopefully, she embraces the lifestyle to it's fullest and revels in her denial and torment, while watching her lover blossom. This, in turn, bringing them ever closer. Made for each other, these two!!

Oh, and very erotic the way a skimpily dressed Piper was left to get on with the chores while the Ladies went out. Hot stuff!

LD

Marvelous Pixie, the engine of your erotic creativity is running at full steam! While I enjoy your new story, let me plead in favor of... Robin! She waits for you... to be alive again and plunge herself into the most delicious entanglements with her lovers (the bishop and the politician...).

This is an incredible addition to the series and so well written. Piper’s decent to ‘girl’ is so erotic, I wonder where you get your ideas from, they are so original. You are such a talented writer. I can’t wait for the next chapter x

Thank you so much, Kat. Your comments mean a lot to me, and I m delighted this is having that effect xxxxxx

Thank you so much, LD. Yes, fast, but that is Lady M's way, not giving them time for second thoughts - and we shall see where Piper goes next xxxxx

Thank you, Anonymous. I wish I knew how my writing works, I just have to go where it wants xxxxx

Thank you so much, darling Emma - I am so glad that you have enjoyed this xxxxx

Another hot one, but I feel it is almost too cruel to treat Piper like this 😟

I hope that she will be allowed to get off soon and release all that submissive tension with a full body orgasm 🤗

Oh fear not, Piper is enjoying it xxxxx

I wonder if this really who she is!

Well done Pixie, I'm enjoying this series immensely. xxx

Thank you, Tasha, we shall find out soon xxx

Thank you, Charlie xxxx

This is so wild, I loved every word and will read the next installment straight away. Thank you again Pixie

“I peeled off the latex hood, getting my ponytail entangled as I did so.” It’s little details like this, which make this feel like lived experience. If that’s artifice, it’s very good artifice. This is why I was never a real sub, I just need to cum too much 😊 Emily

I am so glad you loved this Christie xxxxx

*Blushes* - did it show that clearly? I am so pleased that you like this series, Emily xxxxx

The domination/submission thread is fascinating as Piper discovers herself, questioning who she is and what she desires, and her relationship with Lettie and Lady Margaret develops. Great reading.

Thank you so much, Wag xxxxx

Dr B; My God, Pixie you are getting really kinky with this one, a latex hood, what's next a bondage frame followed by a good spanking or flogging?

Thank you so much, Dr B - yes, a little kinkier than usual - but I am glad you enjoyed it xxxxx