All Comments on 'Life after Sylvia Ch. 08'

Good ending! :)

Is this the end? Wonderful story! THANKS.

Another great chapter! I hope it works out for them but that is totally up to the author of this fantasy. I said last time I couldn't see Michael getting Christena pregnant but if he and Christal are married and he could really be close to the child it might work. Do they become something of a threesome? What about Donna? He does love her too it seems about as much as Christena. Wow the possibilities here! Guess we need another chapter or six to sort this all out! 😁

Cheers

SAGE

For a 'stubborn man', he's a real pushover.

Well what about including Donna and even Christina’s mom? The entire company where they all work (except Christina) has been built by Christina’s dad Jim and he wants Michael to have children with his daughter in order for Jim and his grandchildren to run the company. And what about Jim’s girlfriend/secretary having children? Those children are also heirs to the company. Lots of loose ends to address.

Thoroughly enjoyed it.

THANKS

Had to go with dislike. She’s not for him. She’s already stating she won’t do anything….unless he wants to. Kind sounding like she being caged in. And last time that didn’t go too well. So no, he needs to get a different job somewhere else and start over new and fresh.

Overall I really enjoyed it. Thank you.

Could see and would love to see one more chapter.

Surprised we never heard from or saw Sylvia again. That would be interesting to say the least.

Nice job!

Absolutely crap ending.

That’s why you need a story plan

Some parts really good, some not so good like the trip to NYC.

bad end. he would have been better off with Donna. just because Crystal changed jobs and said she wont do things unless it is together does not mean she is committed. sounds more like she wants her cake and to eat it too.

This is a good story. I enjoyed it very much. I’m thankful for the happy ending, as it was finally a relief to see two people, so obviously in love, come together with a fuller understanding.