All Comments on 'Life Begins Again Ch. 02'

Very hot. Loved that the wait between chapters was not long. That helps move the story right along. Keep em coming!!

I like the story line but I felt you ended this chapter a little too abruptly. I thought it needed a little more to it.

you are weaving.

I was so involved in trying to keep track of things, it kind of distracted from the story. But I'm sure it will come out hot and interesting in the end. Keep writing.

Great story so far, I have been able to keep up with it and I'm a slow reader, well maybe that's why I'm more able to understand it more.

I like the way it's going. Can't wait for the revelations of their own secrets.

The writing is technically proficient and maintains my interest. However, the similarities between what happens with Nick and Nicole, and with Andy and Andrea, are too close. They are almost mirror images and, while I understand that writing for this site is about fantasy, your story must maintain some credibility. We need to see some divergence in the two story lines. Having leveled that criticism (intended constructively,) I gave you five stars and I look forward to the next installment.

I have enjoyed your story so far and I can not wait until you post your next chapter. I have never been a fan of the split stories but you pull it off really well. Thank you for writing your stories. M

I agree, in general, with the others who have commented. You are doing excellent work. You are a skilled writer, with reasonable measurements. No 38DD tits, no 12 inch cocks. You use the terms penis and breasts. Its a miracle!!

You are developing your story well, with rounded, believable characters. Keep up the good work.

Excellent story and realistic too. Keep writing please!!

well we have it all set up just waiting for the fat lady to sing

sex was ok, but i really like the story. 5 stars