All Comments on 'Life Begins Again Ch. 05'
by RonCabo
- 12 Comments
XXMuffDiverXXalmost 10 years agoWe need one more chapter where Nicole uses her Lawyer Detectives to track the "exes" down and bring lawsuits to recover the stolen savings!! of course with a lot more group sex between them
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoI agree with xxxMuffDiver that continuing the story to bring the ex's to justice would be awesome.
Sex4lf57almost 10 years agoPlease don't end the story here. There needs to be at least one more chapter to wrap everything up. I can't tell you how much I've looked forward to these chapters coming out (fairly quickly I might add, too!!). They're very well written and the sex is smoking hot. Keep it going, please!
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoThis was a really hot story series until the end. The end of this chapter felt like you flamed out as it was rather dull for a finish. Maybe you could take some time off and consider a more fitting ending (maybe include a "special" double wedding ceremony, as well). I also think a few chapters before that, the cheaters get what's coming to them.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoWe all make mistakes in life "protecting" our love ones. Great story!
Or you can take other suggestions and continue on.
Well done!
Bfreetorunalmost 10 years agoMaybe that is too much to ask. I did enjoy the story.
Anonymousover 9 years agoSometimes we make callous decisions based on what we consider protection. Love & logic rarely work together.
Anonymousover 9 years agovery good story and has the rare touch of reaslistic sexual situations and that special seldom achieved sexual activities that really come across and you can feel like you are there. I have read a lot of these stories and I put this one in the top 5 I have read.
Anonymousover 9 years agoAnother great story, except for the sudden ending, I guess we have been spoiled by your great writing.
Thank you very much.229B
goducks111almost 4 years agogreat read. really a clever, well written story. my only complaint is i wish there was more. AND i wish you'd write more. one of the best on the site
Rancher46over 3 years agoYour story was great but really deserves a final chapter and that of course leads to marriage of the parents and the children and retrieving of the money that Nicole's husband made off with. Gets my 5 star vote
Anonymousover 3 years agoWhat great story! I liked the characters and the story line. 5 stars from me. Thanks for your time and imagination.
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