All Comments on 'Lucky Me Ch. 05'

to hear Aunt Kathy explain doing Aunt Diane. And do Beth & Jim move out

and get their own Place?

up to your usual standards really good and the little twist in the last chapter.

didnt see that one coming well done really enjoy your writing

A superb series to be sure. Only criticism I have is a few sex scenes could have used more detail and narrative, like when Diane and our hero finally got together towards the end.

Cheers!

I have to say that this set of stories is one of the very best that I have read in a very long time, keep up the good work

That was amazing, easily one of the best series I have read here, probly the best. Great twist, great build up, great everything. Inspiring

Thanks for a great little series. I hope stuff is as good as your eventually. Well done.

Could use another chapter or five maybe boy nocks up kath and beth.Think about it.

I'll comment that it was a good story and I did read all chapters...just that I kinda lose my favor in stories where dad/daughter is present in anyway...don't know why, but I just have a natural existing disdain for that specific genre. I won't give a bad rep for the story though, so good job on the story.

I'll have to agree with DeJeane. I also have a thing against Fathers fucking Daughters. It somehow feels like rape, in the back of my mind. Besides, Jim and Beth have just discovered each other and were exploring each other, where whatever they have is going, how long it is going to last, what their future together holds. It seems somehow wrong to introduce another male into their relationship. Seems like they should just have each other for awhile, and Kathy, Diane, Carol, and Jeff have always got each other. You use 'though', 'needless to say', and 'admittedly' a whold lot. And sometimes I can't tell when someone is talking because yuou mess up those quotation mark thingys.

A story can be great until you start adding other guys into the story. Sorry but that gets 1 star from me

That was a very hot story, but it desperately needs a sequel where we learn how Kathy and Diane got together.

Cheers

Yyyaaayyy...an author who knows to use the term 'thrust' in the past tense also...NOT "thrusters" as so many do...make me appreciate this series more and more...

So, you left it hanging like that, I am going looking at the list of your other stories, to see if a continuation is to be found (HOPEFULLY!!) FIVE**5**STAR SERIES, AT LEAST!!🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟✨✨✨✨✨💫💫💫💫💫

Not for nothing, but I think this is the best of your incest stories that I've read! I haven't read them all mind you. I'm going down the the list, skipping the short stories.

But this one had it all!

Yes you did get your people mixed up a few times, but I was able to work through it. And after all that's the editors mistake, not yours!

All around a great story, that had an ending, and didn't leave the reader hanging!!!!!

5 STARS ALL THE WAY!!!!!!!!!!