All Comments on 'Luke and Amy Ch. 03'

This is unconditional love at its best... This story of forbidden love had my full attention from start to finish...

This is one of my favourite series, hot as hell but with enough love to make it special. I need more, I want these two together.

...but for me it is getting a bit boring now....a bit like flogging a dead horse, I would have liked this story to be shorter then move onto something else. Regurgitating the same stuff really is quite boring.

Warning. Only read this story when you have time to be teased, aroused, and wonderfully tortured by the most taboo, forbidden, sexy, and lust filled brother and sister couple found in the stories of Lit. Written of course by the amazingly talented Miss Goody Two Shoes. Be prepared for a long and intense ride. The story builds your lust until you can hardly take it another second, making for a great erotic read. But don’t start it if you don’t like a long story with great character development. This is erotic writing at its best.

My god that was hot. cant wait for next chapter to come out, and ty

so far all 3 ch of luke and amy are far and I mean far to long not worth the read. I have better and more stories to read I mean 21 pages for only 3 ch you got to be kidding. You need to edit about half of all pages in all 3 ch and that would still be to long

This story could go on for quite a while, but it would stop being good at some point. I really like this story, I think it is perfect. The right amount of romance, the right amount of sex, and the right amount of kink. I can't say anything better.

RS

its time for the parents to find out and maybe the kids go to europe to live.

It's wonderful to sometimes read a short story by a real author instead of a simple wannabee writer. Congratulations !

What a hot chapter, with great scenes and really romantic touches here and there. I loved it. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to read the next chapter. By the way, I love long chapters, so this one made my day. Nice work! And, of course, 5 stars! ^__^

A great story honey. Never mind the anonymous comments for the most part, their always the worst critics and usually the ones who've written a line in a story at all. Just read the positive ones and delete the others. :)

Wow. Action packed. The writing is superb. Keep it going...

Like some of the the anon's, assholes starts with an "a" too! They are just upset that back in high school (I think they might have gone to high school) they received a failing grade in reading!

What does chapter four have in store? Hurry up already!!

P.S. GO MARINERS!!

I have to say, I love these so called "longer" stories; it makes me care about the characters much more so. I like the realism that occurs in their situations and how they're handling it all. The romance between the two is especially cute, don't stop in this regard at all!

Cannot wait for the next installment! :)

Your long, cockteasing tale had me breathless, and the payoff was great!!...only wish that L & A had actually fucked while their friend watched... perhaps in the future they'll be brave & fuck for an audience!!??

Loving the Luke and Amy story. Personally, I'd like to see Luke share Amy around: "monogamy" and "taboo" don't go together too well for me. Others may feel differently. Still, VERY hot story here!

Fuck Shakespeare, and all the other shit we learn in school. Why don't we learn about this? This is the greatest piece of work I have ever seen and the greatest thing I have eve read. Don't stop making this. This wil go down in history it is truly amazing.

I think next time with their friend, things should go farther. She should at least finish him off somehow if he just watches again. Or for real kink she asks Luke to finish him. Or anything in between. Maybe Luke decides he wants to watch her fuck him. Your story and it's so good so far, only take these as suggestions not complaints.

This chapter has the most erotic scene with Luke, Amy & Ethan at his house that I have ever read on Literotica. Excellent work ;-}

Felt pretty sorry for Chris lol

Luke and Amy trusted Ethan. Ethan was Luke's childhood friend. Luke and Amy wanted each other, she is thrilled by being watched, Luke will do anything for her, Ethan can keep it a secret and he was rewarded in a way. The writing is HOT, the action is arousing and kept me hard throughtout. This relationship is full of love, erotic sex and a future for all. Trust is sexy, very sexy, I can't wait. ;)

Didn't like the involvement of others. If it was just watching it would have been okay.

Amazing chapter, I never want it to end, soooo good! :)

This is the sexist story I have ever read so far

I greatly enjoyed the goings on. You keep that interesting and diverse and entertaining. And you keep me curious.

I once wondered about a story of mine completely focusing on a few days but now as I see it here I actually start to feel better about that amount of detail.

Thank you for sharing that!

This is great - and the chapters get longer and longer

Luke and Amy are dual Energizer bunnies. Not only do they have the energy to keep going, but they also fuck like bunnies. What a story! I'm in it for the long haul--I want to learn what happens after the next turn down the slippery slope these two are on.

Great writing!

Looking forward to the next chapter. I'm not sure whether I'm glad I don't have time to read all of this story at once or not. It's hard to have to wait a day or two before I read the next chapter, but it's great to have something to look forward to.

--CarlusMagnus

Dear god this is hot, my member is starting to hurt in my pants ha ha

I'm very picky when it comes to taboo stories and I must admit...I'm compleatly in love with yours. You add a good amount of detail without it being overkill. I like where the plot is going and I LOVED how you added that threat factor in there. I think it was a hugeeee turnon when Luke found the need to protect his little sister. I just wished it had been a little more intense. I cannot wait to continue and thank you for helping me pass the time -Jess

For those checking the comments, a second guy joins them in their relationship, only a little this time and full blown later on, so drop it now before you're even more dissapointed. @author, at least make it clear in the tags or at the beginning of the chapter, would have saved me (and others) some time

Oh man really? I was really getting into it and it looked like it was setting up to be a really good intense romantic incest. But you're saying that friend ends up getting involved later? Lame. Way to ruin it. Kind of shits on all that "belong to you" and "you complete me" talk they spout. :'(