All Comments on 'Make a Wish'

Freaking insane if only a wish would make me change like that

Amazing story! And I agree with the other commenter, if only that could happen!

Please continue this story!!!

Excellent story that would be even better with a part two. Your descriptions of the look and actions of the meat head gym bros was spot on. Always incredibly impressed with themselves and thinking everyone cares what their diet and workout routine is. It shows how they are not only brain damaged but also do not pay attention to the people around them. It is even sadder when you see them randomly doing poses trying to get some woman/girl to notice them as if that would reel the in like a fish on a line.

Incredible story. Great intensity in the writing, loved it!