All Comments on 'Man vs. Daughter'

The story is very well engineered, with very funny and witty exchanges between the couple, and very very sexy. It had me reaching into my pants and wanking right to the end. Well done

To the nth degree. Without a doubt the most idiotic story I've read in 10 years reading on here.

Not worth rating

please divulge how a male person could be so backward, like drinking urine? Perhaps a forged high school diploma? No wonder his wife left him, he is so far below geek freak I wonder how many times he had to try to get his pecker into his wife to get her pregnant with the daughter.

I liked it. People need to realize what type of stories are here on this website. It is fiction and the writer can make the characters do anything they want. I would like to read more of their experiences and discoveries. Thanks for your time and imagination.

shoud have the aunt join them!

It's not their fault. Compassion isn't in their hard wiring in crunch time. Lush green Bamboo shoots, juicy tax breaks, and gullible daughters are there to be used so they can thrive and reproduce. I enjoyed the story throughly in tandem to the considerable skill and humor of the author.

Although if Air Force One had mechanical failure crashing into the ocean. The chief executive and Ivanka are soul survivors, unscathed, but stranded on island, and not rescued in an hour and half that this fictional scenario by VE would become classified top secret, XXX, ex-cathedra certitude of history.

Ergo the obvious score

Full marks *****

I understand you need create oportunity for watersports, but they cross some stream at 6% of battery. At least at morning they shoud go there.

Great reading until the pissing into ones mouth, no mention if daughter was on birth control (as that could have been another angle to the story

Cant rate and wont rate this

VanillaExtract stories are special. It's raw, over the top and fucking funny as hell during moments. Some people love them. More people fucking hate them. I'm in the camp of the former. But I understand the people who are the latter.

Speaking of hating your stories, oi!!! Vanilla! Even though you removed the mother-son-aunt vacuum cleaner story from here I once a year read it from your google drive link. Now the link's gone. Can you put it up so I can download it? Or maybe pm me the link?

This one needs a part two! Love this story!

Fantastic. One of the best stories I read here (and I read many). Sense of humor, eroticism, hard sex and well done. I'm sorry I can not give more than five stars. More stories like this, please.

Loved it and hope you write more , I too had my first time with daddy my and sis loved to be with him . I was very young when we started oral it felt so good .

when he would lick and kiss me there . I was ready at 18 to go all the way as was Sis.

this is the first time ive heard of this story. please, please put up the link again. im thirsty for every single one of yiur stories sir

I'm not one for water sports but this story had me hot and bothered! I love your stories and was willing to look past the urination, but you seriously did a great job with this story. Thank you so much for your work.. they seroiusly get my pussy dripping wet!

BRO, THIS WASN'T BAD. PREMISE ROCKED BUT EXECUTE COULD HAVE BEEN DONE MUCH BETTER.

I've been a fan since your earliest stories - loved how perverse & f***ed up they could be.

Then the heresy of the LIT. BAN came, and all the really good stuff vanished from your posts (not to mention the better Literotica writers).

Posts like:

- Violating Mummy (a better ending & sequel would have been ace), and,

- The Good Sister

Since then I've gotta tell you, your stories seem to have kinda lost their edge. Violating Mummy was freakin hilarious, dude! And the Good Sister was rockn weird sh*t.

Bitchin too much? My Bad. I just miss the legends. Hoping you get it all back soon....

Once again a story as fucking hilarious as it is arousing.

I kept imagining the author watching survival show and taking mental note like : "in the butt really ? I could use that !"

I just love your stories and hope you make more.

And I liked it. Pissing in her ass was a bit too far fetched for me, but worth the read. I recommend using an editor so the writing is top notch. One mistake made me laugh: "ran out of water down by the lake."

Well that certainly piqued my inner kink.For some reason I found myself as hard as Chinese arithmetic.And funny to top it off.Love the dig at pedo scout masters.

I was aroused and laughing at the same time. Great writing!

Dad daughter stories are always most erotic, but this is good one with humor.

Another awesome story. I giggled so much reading this one.

Some horny no brain celled human should at least learn what fiction means before jumping here. Imagination is fictional story's limitation. Go study first kiddos. You aren't even legal to be here, anyways.

Really enjoyed this, hope you do more of this genre. Survival incest (and procreation because of the sense of panic and newly elevated bonds) is really hot.

Hot story. Would love to see a follow up with perhaps pregnancy and how they deal with her carrying her father's child.

You have to write part 2!

I'm not usually a fan, but I made the story more believable for me. Thank you.

“ The man nodded slowly. "The ol' pissing in the ass technique, huh? Yup, my Boy Scout leader taught me that one on more than one occasion."

"Uh... really?" I said.

"Yup," the ranger said. "Saved my life at summer camp when we ran out of water down by the lake."”

Hysterical and I love your stories so much. Please write more.

Heyy can anyone plz provide me with more such survival incest stories ...

Fuck that was an amazing story and so plausible makes me wanna go camping with my daughter

Great story, but it did prompt a needed PSA. If you're in bear country, the last thing you want to do is be quiet. That's the best way to surprise a bear. Make noise so you don't surprise it. They'll stay away from you.

Please write another new daddy/daughter have to fuck to survive story!! loved this!!

Hey I really wanna fuck my daughter too... she just turned 19 a few years ago and I really can't resist her

"Yup," the ranger said. "Saved my life at summer camp when we ran out of water down by the lake." Is without a doubt the funniest thing I have ever seen on this site… bravo!!

When the ranger asked about the Panda, I literally lost my shit for 5 minutes. Five stars from me.

This was a cute story and I liked it. But to be as unprepared for emergencies in the wilderness as these two were tells me they could get lost in a supermarket and manage to starve to death.

If you write another survival story, I'm sure you'll do better..

Story is obviously intentionally ridiculous but in a fun and sexy way. Writing is good. Thanks for sharing this this tale.

What I can never understand about these stories is why the father goes for the daughters asshole,I would be spending all of my time deep in her sweet little pussy making her cum

Time to take my daughter hiking! I'll make sure we both have more than enough to drink before we get 'lost'.

I think it flowed really well. Very enjoyable.

Lol. One of the funniest shit I've ever read.

A very unique take on survival...

Fantastic story!! I can just picture my daughter and myself going for a hike and getting lost. 'd definitely make sure to use your survival techniques.

Loveit thanks very much… great character buildup with the sense of humour too… I especially liked the action but having it built with context adds greater depth!

Clearly a parody of Bear Grills Man vs Wild, which made the drinking pee bit okay, but I could do without the anal crap.

Funny and sexy. I like the romance incest stories, but I also like how yours aren't the romance type (at least what I've read so far). It's a nice change of pace. Loved the story and the only gripe I have, is that it felt like the word "daddy" was a bit overused. Still 5/5

Funny & hot. 🥵 this was well written and great to read. 5 stars 🌟 from me. The first anal story I’ve liked.

Bill S.

Is she retarded? Why does she keep saying pee?

You have a twisted mind to write these fantastically hot and erotic stories. Keep writing