All Comments on 'Martin's Step Daughter'

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Badly written and sick

It's fun and the language is perfect considering you are enjoying a visit from across the border. Why not and who wound not enjoy the experience. It's erotica for god's sake.

Good basic idea, but very poorly written. Your English is poor and the use of a basic spell check is non existant. The story was rushed and could have been much better with a coherant character development.

If you want to keep writing, I would suggest that you get a competant editor to assist you. Don't give up!

Not written at all, crap storyline

The grammar was absolutely atrocious.

hot addition !

Will there be more ?

This submission has numerous wording problems, and is less developed than most.