All Comments on 'Mary and the Caretaker'
by rich0524
- 21 Comments
Anonymousabout 14 years agoDidn't read it just read your intro and voted 1 star. If i could I would vote -1 star. Oh and all your stories wil be marked down. by 1 star.
Anonymousabout 14 years agoyour story sucked because it was fucking stupid. I'ld say get a life but more appropriately, get some creative writing courses. I couldn't get past the first 4 chapters it stunk so badly.
kathy2b46about 14 years agoi think it is very believable in theory maybe not the conversation, i can see how she could want the old guy and for sure get addicted to black cock quickly once she started gettting it, but letting the young guy move in , not sure , but still a turn on for me
cheryl_4funabout 14 years agobe wonderful to have a caretaker like that to be the caretaker of pleasure, very believable, looks like she will get lots of care soon now that she has to have it daily
Anonymousabout 14 years agoThis was a extremely well written story. Two people who were able to help each other out. Thanks for sharing.
Anonymousabout 14 years agoI thought it was stupid and poorly written, whatever.
Anonymousabout 14 years ago1 star for insulting your readers , go play high and mighty somewhere else
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoI am someone who enjoys reading these stories AND finds amusement from the comments of racist imbeciles that frequent this section of literotica to leave horrid complaints. It was thoroughly amusing to read your intro and because of that I felt compelled to leave a message. However, I was not impressed with the story. Your intro showed that you can be witty and clever, so I was hoping to experience some of that in the story. Even though I believe the other commentor is attempting to be hurtful, it would be best if you sharpened you skills to add some of that cleverness in your future stories. Anyway I wish you the best in your future endeavors and pay no attention to haters but do try to find some constructiveness in those that are critical of your work if just to make it better.
Good Day!
Jeff - NY
Anonymousover 11 years agoNeed to know what's going to happened when hubby comes homeeeee!
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoCome on dude....that was like a comedy, was not hot at all..lol
Maybe next time , try and make your stories more believable...haha
Anonymousover 10 years agogreat fucking by the older man if it were me i would move in the slut wifes house untill i had knocked her up and put her into maternity knickers , time her hub came home she would have 1 kid and another in her belly, these sexy young wifes love older big cock
knickerlover13almost 8 years agomore please.another black cock slut now!!! she needs a gangbang with lots of black cock.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoNothing is better than an old black man defiling a beautiful white girl!! Exquisite!
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoI really enjoyed this story. I rated it a 4 only because the ending was so abrupt.
On a side note, gotta love the impotent spew from the Klansmen who, knowing he is reading interracial erotica, insists he isn't and threatens a low rating. If indeed he legitimately doesn't like your offerings it might just be because you use "big words" and don't offer pictures. Whatever you do, please don't "dumb it down" for the mouth breathers. Thank you for doing what you do. Keep up the good work!
Anonymousover 3 years agokryje już od kilkunastu lat wielki kruczoczarny murarz.Gdy zaczynaliśmy couckold , żona miała 23 lata a murzyn 44 i po roku tego układu,żona moja już urodziła pierwszego chłopaka z afrykańskiej spermy.Murzyn rucha ją pięknie - po misjonarsku swoim wielkim,grubym penisem i zawsze leje spermę do cipki.
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