All Comments on 'Massage Appointment'

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Kev HKev Hover 17 years ago
Well written

A slightly different twist makes this read more enjoyable than the average vampire-type fantasy. And, come on, who hasn't had massage fantasies? The extra dark twist was a treat of the season. Nicely done.

sacksackover 17 years ago
very effective...

Has more twists than a curvy road. One that I just had to finish. Great ending! Good luck!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I thought what the hell?

First the poor guy is just having fun, then the he realizes he is now a vampire, perhaps even worse? The whole story paints a scene, nicely done and I liked it. Great Halloween twist. An A from this reader.

TE999TE999over 17 years ago
Fangs for the memories

Great horror story. I gave it a five. Very descriptive and somewhat disturbing. Good luck in the contest!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Lost my erection at the end

Very sexy horry story. It was teriffying. But I did shag off after reading this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
....

what the fuck?

TavadelphinTavadelphinalmost 12 years ago
More Sci Fi or horror

But still well done and fun -

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Utter rubbish

Boring story

Hornydevil47Hornydevil479 months ago

I know this is a 17year old story but just had to say. Thanks. Unlike anon below I bloody well enjoyed it. Not rubbish at all. But you can't please everyone. Mel B known as Hornydevil47

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