by Many Feathers
You have much more to say on this subject. Love where you're taking us, but this story stopped abruptly, Dissapponited am I! Five stars in spite of the quick end. The quick end is only a problem in that you haven't written the third part yet!
I for one would like another part to this story. What I have found is authors don't want people to want more of a good story. I've found out, authors do not care about their readers.
As Jared had suggested in his thoughts to her, she had begun removing her top, though she quickly approached Kris once again standing in front of her, letting her know as she did so, that she expected Kris to finish doing that. Only too happily to oblige her, she began doing so.
had to read this 4 times before understanding what the fuck you were saying