All Comments on 'Misinterpretation'

I enjoyed your story. It is a very exciting fantasy.

interesting problems to come between Dan and Dana.

I hope you will pursue this with more chapters. Good story so far.

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But I also, think there will be problems in the marriage OR she'll take to it like water and invite Bill over every night.

She orgasmed with Bill. That alone should get her agreement to accept him. If Dan asks her to try someone else there might be a problem, though, cuz she really doesn't want to mess around. She doesn't want her body to be seen, even.

I think Dan is messing over a good wife and he'll eventually regret it.

You had a nice slow build up of story tension all during the seduction of the wife. Bill was so nice and innocent right up to the ending. Nice twist at the ending when Bill turned out to be the instigator. Proof that you did a good job on the story is that you got the anonymous romanian all worked up. Bet he had fun jacking off over it.

...But I'll give it the full 100 just to balance out the critics with the personal issues.

As a story goes, it was a good evolution into the swing... but the end – the "twist" – felt a little too engineered, a bit arbitrary. Other than that, great look at the mindset of the players...

You built the tension wonderfully, then just let it all dissapate. Oh, well, thanks for writing.

Before the ending, I was mildly disappointed with this bog-standard "husband pimps wife to acquaintance" tale. It just looked like a kinky man trying to get his wife hustled into bed, while she refuses to believe it. But the ending, where it becomes obvious that the men have set her up in order to starts swapping or some other game, is nicely handled. It's the very ending, where she realizes the conspiracy and the adultery mean bad, bad things for her, which makes this a good story. Now she's faced with the fact that her husband is not the man she thought he was, her co-worker friends are in conspiracy with him, and she's violated her own standards for reasons which are completely untenable. She realizes that she is not pat of a couple, but rather a woman on her own, and she's in trouble.

Good writing, but I gave up before I got half way. If you like wimp, pimp husbands,it's probably a good story, but it's not my cup of tea. 60 year old George

that although the story was well written the plot was strange and disjointed. Dan encourages her to dress like a slut but when other men hit on her he fends them off. Then Bill and Dan tricks her into being fucked by Bill (I disagree that she was seduced; she had no idea what was going on). Lastly, she finds out that her loving husband has been fucking Sandy over the past year.

So she was such an idiot they had to trick her (even extending Sandy out of town trip by another week) into fucking Bill! Obviously, since they were not hurting for money her job with Bill and Sandy was also a setup. Dana's first tip off should have been the lack of reaction by Sandy when she went to dinner with them and then Sandy left town. So the lack of sex from Dan was due to the attentions he was giving Sandy and others (he probably joined a swingers club). Even Dan's better loving was part of the plot to have Bill fuck her.

I do not know if there is a sequel in the mix but this story set up a perfect revenge story as part 2.

Bottom Line: I do not get the ending. Just because they tricked her into being fucked by Bill that does not mean that she is a "hot wife" now.

SleeplessinMD

she's got enough of them in her immediate vicinity. Clearly the husband hasn't loved her for quite some time

(he cheated). As for Bill and Sandy, she should put a lot of distance between them and her. She should give Sandy a

"facial" in the doughnut fryer first though, of course, for having sex with her husband.

I agree with other posters--a revenge chapter is definitely called for on this one.

Why do you people who don't like adventurous couple stories read them? Just to have something to bitch about?

Well written. Nice slow seduction.

People who complain about negative submissions....what, are we not allowed to comment on a story unless that comment is positive? I didn't know that I checked my 1st amendment rights at the url. Try this on...if you don't like the negative comments, DON'T READ THEM. How's that work for you, it's just about as fair and makes as much sense as jimewests' comment. Besides which, and last I checked, the comments section is generally understood to pertain to the submission, not the other comments. I swear, some people have to invent crap to whine about.........

Sorry, Magmaman. Couldn't read it.

No member of a "board of directors for a big corporation" would have his wife working "at a local bakery making those huge puffy dinner rolls".

Just wouldn't happen. Couldn't get past there... burst out laughing.

What a riot!

She just does not seem like the swinger type - so unless there is something interesting coming down the pipe we have trouble right here in river city lol.

I agree with those who feel she was not seduced but manipulated by the husband and bill to pull her into the swapping while she was trying to save her marriage. Yes seduction is manipulation - there is however, a general sense of romance not the abuse by her husband. Just my opinion.

If she decides she likes it good for them if not - watch out she has the power now - she knows what they want and what they will do to get it -

Oh yeah BTW a wife doing "fun work" outside the home while married to a corporoid is NOT unlikely - many actually have to work full damn time -

and far more believable than most.

Any man that wants his wife to fuck another man is an asshole wimp cuck. I hate assholes. And there's another chapter. Damn I'll see it through. It can't get any worse.

And be back with a salmon filleting knife. That's not a husband, that's a pimp! I'd have fought this shit tooth and nail.

1 star because I can't vote it 0.

I guess (hope) we'll find out in Chap 2. I assume the relatively lower scores were occasioned by the anti-cuck and/or anti-cheating wives crowds. I prefer to give the author credit for writing a well-done story.

This story clearly needs an ending. The wife was left expressing doubt and self-loathing. She will either accept her new view of herself as a whore, give up on life or fight back.

Obviously, this small slice of her person does not let us really know her but I had the feeling from her description of her life that she would not accept being treated this way. And the fact the she had discovered that she could have more than her wifely duty would lead her to leave. Though some sort of vengeance might be coming as well.

No love in this shit story.

Seems pretty easy and very straight forward.

More cuck fag stories...may they all catch a STD.

Just don't see why you wrote this. JPB envy maybe, can't think of any other reason.

Definately not one of your better offerings, sad to say.

Welcome to slutdom!

Next thing you know they are all going to swingers clubs and both couples are split up in less than a year.

There aren't people this stupid are there?