All Comments on 'Mom and Daughter Compete'

I liked it a lot but it would have been much better if we had an idea as what the characters looked like physically. It really helps me paint a picture in my mind if I know how big their tits are along with his cock. They don't have to be 44EEE or 12" or anything, but give us something to work with during the read. Just a suggestion.

Slow moving..maybe it was just me..

"Then she stopped. She turned the movie on. We watched. I didn't know what to do."

There was a skit on Saturday Night Live, years ago, with Kevin Nealon, Phil Hartman and John Lovitz. They were playing Tarzan, Frankenstein's Monster, and Tonto, respectively, and were singing "Jingle Bells". (Actually, Nealon and Lovitz sang/spoke, while Hartman just growled.) It went something like, "Jingle Bell. Jingle Bell. Jingle all way. Much fun had in open sleigh." This story reminded me of that skit. You could have dropped the verbs, I suppose, to make your sentences even shorter, but it was pretty much as laconic as a caveman telling a story.

"She stop. She grab cock. I touch boob. Boob feel good. I cum."

Man, did this story suck.

Omg I'm so hot

Made me so hard!

great story, loved the topic.

ignore the mouth breathing trolls who come to a jerkoff site to complain.

OMG,this story is scalding HOT.

My cock got sore jacking off.

WOW WOW

This amazing story has just begun. I can't wait for the next installment.

I just love mother/daughter stories. This one is great.

Not usually into incest , but this was VERY HOT !!!

Would absolutely love more of this , highly erotic , story . Maybe mother and daughter could start some new adventures ??? Just a thought ...

...the best I've read in a long time. Great build-up and fantastic sex!

Fresh out of college I bought half of a duplex to save money. The other half was empty for 9 months. One day a moving truck pulled in and I watched them load their stuff. There were about six hot guys and three sexy young girls. Eventually I found out they two brothers had bought the duplex. Within 3 months I was sleeping with both of them. If one was busy the other would come over and spend the night. I knew neither were long term, but damn, this girl was getting some nice hard cock one regular basis. They lived there three years and when they moved a young couple moved in. She taught me all about girl on girl sex. I loved my duplex

...very well told. It was easily worth the 5 stars I gave it. I want to read more:)

Incompetence and lack of ANY writing skills is staggering !! Just 1* for this pathetic drivel.

As always, outstanding.

The right mix of taboo and realities of what a situation like that would really be.

A most impressive writer. I am in love with your mind.

I just found these stories and do enjoy .

Hope you will keep writing

Thanks

It was such a pleasure to read such a hot story. I love the way Kate shares Kevin with her mum as well as sharing mum with Kevin.

It looks like they just starting to share each other.

5*****. Short, the tension grows, the sex scene at the end is perfect. Well done, could be your best story yet. Could use 1 or 2 more chapters.

WOW

A hot story not involving infidelity. Great!

Very well done

Bill S.

Hot mother, hot daughter lesbian sex is so hot!

Fun; competition can always bring out the best in people that's for sure!

I love your handling of mother-daughter and FFM. The humorous rivalry, the daughter's growing sexual appreciation of her mother and the growing triangular relationship are all beautifully narrated.Woish I could give this storymore stars!

Sarahxxxxx

Super hot. Going for more of your stories.

What happened next? What happened when Kevin returns? I sure like threesome stories.

This surely needed a follow-up.