All Comments on 'Mom's Bed Ch. 04'

This is another great story, which is what I have come to expect from this author.

More. More. A Truely erotic tale. Great story.

5 stars.

I loved the other three chapters, but I was a little let down by this one. Having Bobby fuck Lisa kinda ruined it for me. It seems to me that if Lisa really is Brian's, he shouldn't be so willing and anxious to share her with another man, and she shouldn't be so ready to fuck another man. I'll continue reading future chapters, but I hope that you don't end up doing the same thing with the mother.

I have to agree with 'Not As Good As Ch. 1-3'.

That is what we are expecting from you. As for the guys who did not like it "not as good as Ch 1-3" The relation between Bobby and his family is not a love story!!. Yes they love each other as family but they are fucking and not making love.

One question for JD. Will there be more chapters for Joel and Carrie or Jennie's "Nightmare"?

Why did you leave Francis out of this? His sister, Gloria, basically had a foursome with her boyfriend and cousins and she watched her cousins fucking each other....Francis is kinda out of the loop now. How would he feel if he found out about what his sister and cousins did? Not a good feeling to think about that.

Is Francis left out? the question was asked. I would suspect the author has plans for more chapters with Francis being brought in and maybe Uncle James. Guess time will tell, but so far the author has expanded the group of incest partakers with each chapter, maybe his way of us always looking for more. Though I don't care for anal, I think overall it is a good story and hope it continues. Can you think of anything better to look forward to then the stubborn uncle fucking his sister and then finally his own daughter as the rest watch while participating in the family orgy?

I have to say I loves it, I disagree with the ones that didn't like Bobby and Lisa together, for starters Bobby is pretty much a member of the family, he loves Gloria and she loves him and are more the likely going to get married, and like another person said it's not really a love story Brian isn't making love to his mom and Lisa he's fucking them, yeah he loves them and they love him but it's not a romantic kind of love at least not yet anyway. As for Francis not being included in the chapter, I thought that was great, because it makes the story more interesting, and makes the reader want more. I can't wait for the nest chapter JD keep up the good work

This was a great chapter in the series. I can't wait for the rest. As the one comment suggested maybe the uncle could finally join in. But whatever you decide, you simply must continue the series. PLEASE!

Loved it one of the best I've read

A great series!

One minor error. Used Tara instead of Lisa.

Mixing up your stories involving a Brian.

the oldest (older)

red handed (red-handed)

pushed my sweat (sweats)

could care less (couldn’t)

laying down (lying)

You're little brother (Your)

glowed in excitement (with )

Frenching (frenching)

Babe (babe)

I could tell Tara was close (WHO IN THE HEEL IS TARA????)

could hold a straight face (couldn’t)

pent up (pent-up)

couldn't fit anymore (any more)

red haired (red-haired)

She lied down (lay)

mouth watering (mouth-watering)

stopped being so demanded (demanding)

throws of release (throes)

you (are) laying (lying)

you (to) make Bobby

my cock (-to) slip between her legs (slipped)

Heaven (heaven)

mind if its own (of)

simple found (simply)

playing with (your) pussy

worse he can say in no (worst) (is)

few idea (ideas)

cousin's eye (eyes)

lifted the top leg (her)

There no time (There’s)

another chance as Lisa (at)

Can't get enough of this hot fucking story.

Bringing other people in kills the story for me. Bobby and Gloria fucking other people proves there is no true love there.

Sorry but partner swapping with Lisa and Bobby just killed the story for me 1 star and won't read the rest. Not everyone has to be whores to make a good story

Even though this is fiction, I didn't like this chapter due to the partner swapping and group sex in the same bed. Earlier, Lisa said she was Brian's slut. With her jumping onto Bobby like she did; that just makes her a slut, not a personal slut. There's a difference. And yes, Brian is just as bad.

the previous stories was easily 5 stars, this one i only gave it 3 stars due to bringing in another guy.. what a shame!

This episode makes a lot clear to me.

Bryan doesn't really love Lisa, or anyone else. Lisa is his slut, and together with Bryan they manipulates Bobby and Gloria into cheating on each other. Wonder where the love is between Gloria and Bobby?

So to me Bryan is just a manipulative egoistic asshole. I don't like him anymore. Mom is the only one so far I still like.

Got my mom and sister knock them both up my kid in them

Swapping really did kill the thrill for me. The story kinda started off well but this chapter messed it up. 1 🌟 from my side

Better and better and better.