All Comments on 'Mom's Secret'

Thanks.

You know... you seemed to skip all of the story. Without that you just have sex. Mom had a secret that was? What? That she marurbated every once in a while. You are really the worst kind of writer. One with no imagination what’s so ever

... just seems a bit rushed and unfinished.

A nice loving story between a Mom and Son

And also pretty sexy . Was that was author's goal ? If so. (E-)mission accomplished.

I hope part 2 is in the works.

Shocked that this came from the same person that wrote Ali's Art (which is one of the best stories I've read on this site). Don't understand what's happened to your writing of late. You're obviously extremely talented... please take your time with your next story to make sure the storyline is there.

I wonder if 1 person wrote all 3 of the above comments.

I enjoyed the story line and the sequence of sexual progression that led him to, and through the fucking. I do think the ending was too sudden, and the story too compressed to provide us with the tease and story climax that can make a good writing even better. Toss out the clock, "Stop and smell the roses", then give us the more thorough version..

Dick

Hope there are more chapters, since this is only a beginning. Is she now pregnant?? Did they luck out and he didn't knock mom up this time?? What's in their future?? Hope there are more chapters coming.

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhibited sex. Reminds me of my mother and myself.

Yep , went straight to the sex, But Screw it . I LIKED IT! They both got the love they wanted, and yearned for. Great little story!

Well written, good pace, and hot sex.

Well done!

Needs more a build up and then more middle and then a good finish.

Blow job (Meh) doesn't know where a dick and cum belongs...Anal? NOT interested, I'm not gay...

5 stars although there could have been a LOT more

That's hot! And, understandable. Mom needs it and so does he. Who else can you trust at certain times in your life?