All Comments on 'More Than Expected'

This left me breathless... OMG. The alternating viewpoints between the dominant and submissive was so sexy. You captured the psychology of the sub-dom relationship really well. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

Thanks for allowing us to watch your scene through words. Loved the duel voices

"I" did NOT take part!

Story therefore totally unbelievable!

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This was a good read, you're just pissed off at your dead ex wife for doing the same thing to you your entire marriage!! You're the sad cuckhold on here. And you fucking insane, why not kill yourself!!!

Slow build up, all senses, good use of alternating POV. Good, sensual writing.

You know who this is...just couldn't log in right this moment

The alternating perspectives really works, showing their shared journey. Everytime it switches, it just builds up more & more. Hot story & look forward to more.