All Comments on 'Morning After'

approach to having sex with a stranger. Your writing is erotic and well done. Having enjoyed this segment of Helen's inauguration into sex, I am looking forward to seeing - and reading - more chapters.

You and your hero both showed admirable patience inintroducing Helen to adulthood. I will bet there are lady readers who will be envious that their 'firsty' was not as kind.

How about it was you who slipped the pill, 'framed' the other guy and got a willing companion instead of a semi-conscious one.

Excellent writing.

Damn, I hope my first time is as kind as this, but with someone I know, and I'm in a relationship with.

bordering on arrogance.

Why would she be on the pill if she was a virgin and not expecting to have sex? Also, the drug element is a bit disturbing and not OK that he tried to frighten her at the beginning after she woke up - I can only imagine how scary and traumatic it would feel to wake up in a strange place not knowing where you were and with a stranger saying that.