All Comments on 'Mother I Hate Ch. 03'

There were still quite a few errors there, mostly omissions though. Gotta talk to my editor about that.

Stop with all the daydreaming and get on with the story. The daydreams just fill space and do not add enough to the storyline to justify using them in every chapter. I hope that you actually give these guys some balls and exact some revenge on mommy bitch a the little pet sister. Don't ruin the story by having the male characters wimp out and mommy bitch winning. This story has a lot of potential don't screw it up.

Get on with the damn story already. I didn't wait a month for this

Okay I apologise for the pace of the story. I don't want it to be a quick story of mother-son/ father-daughter/any other combination you can think of banging. I want the story to have some depth. But I promise you there'll be progress in the next chapter.

About my spelling, I'm not a brit but I did go to a brit school so... My editor is american though, that's why there are a few inconsistencies. Sorry.

I think your story has got a good story line but I'm a little disappointed and pissed off with how you have portrayed it, I think you could have done better and instead of the son having a fantasy of fucking his mum to actually having him fucking her and to actually getting her pregnant. In the first two chapters I gave you a vote of five with the hope that you'd get better, so with this chapter I've decided that it only warrants a two vote. Sorry about that, but I hope you do continue with the story and that you ramp it up a bit

I get that the story is progressing slowly, but there are a lot of characters interacting with each other to make the story work. The son thinks his father's a saint so he can't just jump in bed with his mother whom he also hates.

I'm waiting for the perfect time to reveal itself, on the other hand I'll involve the sister in the next chapter. There might even be some hot sex there. Like I said in the first chapter I'm making this up as I go, I didn't plan out the whole story before I started writing it.

On other matters, two? Come on! And I really put a lot of effort in writing this chapter too. Damn! Anyway thanks for voting.

:)

If I had a mother like her I would have killer her. Kids like in the story don't respect their father.

This wimp

Yep, your fucking up the story. See see if you save it in Ch4. I doubt it though

I’m trying to keep up with the story however, keep out so many other dream fantasies.

So far no incest just fantasy about it so far the integrity of the writer is slipping fast