by patty_parker60
you need to write on how the mother and daughter first started, give us more detail but a good story.
One thing I'm hoping for in Part 2 (hint, hint...HINT!!) is strapon ANAL ACTION...a great start; THANK YOU
Lost all interest when the breasts went to FF size two huge bags of fat eeeeew!
Any with CONSTRUCTIVE FEEDBACK I'm quite interested in your opinion; any DOLT can manage 'YUK...size FF boobs are tooooooooooooobig....two big sacks of fat...the VAPORS...dearie me...THE VAPOOORS!'
U said it 1000% PERFECTLY Mrs P: as usual, 'Anonymous' posting almost always include 'dick-type' comments from cowards without the balls 2 criticize someone else's work and let them know who it is...U have asked for *CONSTRUCTIVE COMMENTARY*...here's some: as usual, your sentence structure, 'heat quotient', everything...is ON POINT...keep writing please!
I'm referring to those who submitted constructive criticism or compliments
This story is AMAZING, AND CAN'T WAIT 4 the ANAL in Chapter 2!!
I give it 5 stars, and only wish it could be more...has it ALL: LESBIAN ANAL, DOMINATION, SUBMISSIVE MOTHER, BIG BOOBIES (AND ASS), LINGERIE
Is there a follow-up? I'm guessing TIME is a factor (I understand that you aren't being paid for your work and other "life activities" impose, as with us all, and so the shortness of the stories is understandable).
U never disappoint, at least in MY view...I adore lingerie (wear it often), and I'm addicted to anal sex. I love Women & Men (probably 00/30 in favor of the fairer sex), and your stories press buttons DEEP WITHIN me. Thank you so much