All Comments on 'My Di'

Just a bit too obvious.

a vacation. You know where you will be ending up, but the trip there is still fun!

Call me crazy - but I just enjoyed the heck out of this story. I loved the surprise ending - and no - I'm not giving it away. *grins* You did your job -Bob! Well Written!

I wouldn't walk across the street for that salary and you make it sounds like this is a huge amount of money. I quit right after the character went wild over what, in today's world, is chump change.

This is wild.

Very well done with a "Ribald Tales" ending.

Nothing like a convluted tale.

Man, I'd like to sit in on that conversation! That's worth a story in itself.

This was a fun read, Bob!

Regards, Jack

An okey story, but anyone who did not anticipate the connection between Di and Diane has to be a little dense. I think they call it telegraphing your punchs. the Ct. Yankee

That is great if i was hubby i would be looking for the mountains with Dianne and Kirby there he will never get any sleep Please continue with chapter 2 i want to see how he talks himself out of this mess with Diane and Kirby

Atlanta,Ga.

Pat M.

This is what your mind can deliver that is appreciated by 90% or more of readers.

bobie the only problem is that this is still a low percentage of the type of story that you chose to write.

Cheating yes, but self demeaning - not at all.

Thanks with more of this type looked forward to.

I don't think that the husband has anything to worry about even if his wife figures out the truth. If Kirby is anything like the husbands in JPB's other stories she will end up in a closet watching hubby have sex with lots of other women. As soon as he is done she will leap outof the closet to suck another woman's pussy cream off of his cock, all the while accepting her role as a female cuckold and enjoying it immensely.

Turnabout is fair play, isn't it?

Good story even though you telegraphed the punchline.

Very entertaining story thanks for sharing .

Obvious, inevitable, and good. A nice tease of a story. We can imagine what (and who) comes next.

hahahhahahahaah I loved it. Caught me off guard but a fantastic twist. good job

Could have been much more of a surprise if it had been something like Penelope, which can be Penny or Polly.

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You have written, this one is set up perfectly for sequels! You left us hanging, Bob! Not cool, man! Not cool! Has anyone written another chapter? Could someone post it in a he comments if so?

In need of chapter 2

Yet another story with no ending.

because you never finish a story just to piss off readers, I will no longer read your unfinished symphonies AND hope others will also see you for the childish person you are.