- Loving Wives
- My First Wife
- Comments
All Comments on 'My First Wife'
by davyred
- 35 Comments
Anonymousover 19 years agoI hope you get the comments that this deserves. This guy would have to improve greatly just to become a wimp.
Anonymousover 19 years agotoo bad this author couldn't or wouldn't write this whole plot out fully.scored a 3
migover 19 years agoOn the one one hand there are wimp stories and then there is this.He doesn't even make a good wimp.
esknrover 19 years agoI really don't understand why people who don't like this type story read them and make negative comments. I think it was great and would like to see many more like this. Don't let the negative comments stop you, keep writing. Did she get pregnant again. Write about those other adventures.
Anonymousover 19 years agostumpbred bastards did you have to end up supporting. Were they all pickininnys, red headed niggers? I would have supported the niggers kids like I would have let the pope fuck me in the ass. motherfucker could raise his own bastard, she could get her tubes tied, or she could let old Bill pimp for her or sell dope to support her and her bastard..
fumunda cheezeover 19 years agostumpbred bastards did you have to end up supporting. Were they all pickininnys, red headed niggers? I would have supported the niggers kids like I would have let the pope fuck me in the ass. motherfucker could raise his own bastard, she could get her tubes tied, or she could let old Bill pimp for her or sell dope to support her and her bastard..
fumunda cheezeover 19 years agostumpbred bastards did you have to end up supporting. Were they all pickininnys, red headed niggers? I would have supported the niggers kids like I would have let the pope fuck me in the ass. motherfucker could raise his own bastard, she could get her tubes tied, or she could let old Bill pimp for her or sell dope to support her and her bastard..
fumunda cheezeover 19 years agostumpbred bastards did you have to end up supporting. Were they all pickininnys, red headed niggers? I would have supported the niggers kids like I would have let the pope fuck me in the ass. motherfucker could raise his own bastard, she could get her tubes tied, or she could let old Bill pimp for her or sell dope to support her and her bastard..
Anonymousover 19 years agoTHIS JUST ANOTHER NIGGER FUCKING A WHITE WOMEN, WITH A NEW TWIST , SHE HAS A KINKY HEADED MONKEY, WHATS NEW IN THIS CRUMMY STORIES
Anonymousover 19 years agoSTOP GIVING WHITE WHORE TO US BLACKS KEEP THEM FOR BUBBA.HE USED TO OUR LEFTOVERS.ASK HIS MAMA.
Anonymousover 19 years agoI've read a lot of stories in this vein, and I assure you that this is one of them.
Anonymousover 19 years agoas a lover of cuckold creampie stories, i loved this one. well done and dont be discouraged by the negative comments. one of the best in fact
Esteban03over 19 years ago....by the self appointed "moral guardians" of the LW category. There is an argument for having a "Cheating Wives", or similar, category. But whether this lot could give up their daily fix of outrage, and stay away, is another story.
In the meantime you're stuck with what is and you have written a good story, hot and well paced, about a relationship which endured for 12 years - more than many!
Keep going, you've got a lot of what it takes to be very good.
Esteban03over 19 years ago....by the self appointed "moral guardians" of the LW category. There is an argument for having a "Cheating Wives", or similar, category. But whether this lot could give up their daily fix of outrage, and stay away, is another story.
In the meantime you're stuck with what is and you have written a good story, hot and well paced, about a relationship which endured for 12 years - more than many!
Keep going, you've got a lot of what it takes to be very good.
Esteban03over 19 years ago....by the self appointed "moral guardians" of the LW category. There is an argument for having a "Cheating Wives", or similar, category. But whether this lot could give up their daily fix of outrage, and stay away, is another story.
In the meantime you're stuck with what is and you have written a good story, hot and well paced, about a relationship which endured for 12 years - more than many!
Keep going, you've got a lot of what it takes to be very good.
Esteban03over 19 years ago....by the self appointed "moral guardians" of the LW category. There is an argument for having a "Cheating Wives", or similar, category. But whether this lot could give up their daily fix of outrage, and stay away, is another story.
In the meantime you're stuck with what is and you have written a good story, hot and well paced, about a relationship which endured for 12 years - more than many!
Keep going, you've got a lot of what it takes to be very good.
Anonymousover 19 years agoWOW - Usually the big black cock is in part 2 - the black baby is in part 3 - well done sir cuckold - now all you have to do is explain why you and your loving wife broke up - did you insist on a black gangbang or wern't you whoring her out for enough money per pop. Perhaps not sucking the cum from her properly. Well is it any better with your second and third whore? I hear they just won't respect you unless you wear a dress when you serve the black masters drinks and clean their cocks properly. Well you will learn eventually.
First story eh - except for the 3 comments from Spain not exactly a success story. Well it's tough to sell absurdity and sickness to normal people. Are you normal? Ah, a sickie right - well we thought so. Are you having fun disrespecting normal males? Gosh, don't include yourself if you actually feel this is erotic or sexy! So, why did you do this disrespect to yourself and us non-sick people. Was it the Christmas Spirit that befudled you? You can do better for yourself and us. Selfishly, we want that - Regards
Anonymousover 19 years agoI mean that was hot. If they dont like it their just not kinky. Kinky people like me have a lot of fun. This story was told with perfection. I could not even tell it better. And I like kinky pussy stories. As long as NO ONE GETS HURT and you like it do it. One hell of a good tale. clint
Sugarbaby4uover 19 years agoThis is a hot story and reflects many real life situations.
Military wives do fuck around a lot, it is part of the lifestyle.
So what if wifey is finding cock elsewhere as long as she is cumming home to roost!
Bravo and I hope the writer cherished this remarkable woman!
Anonymousover 11 years agoand tossed her in the ocean anyone that likes this shit deserves that same.
tazz317over 11 years agodon be upset by the infestation, TK U MLJ LV NV
Anonymousabout 6 years agoBlame your wife when you are the idiot? You got what you deserved. Did you learn anything.....or are you sharing your second wife too? fucked moron!
