All Comments on 'My Wonderful Submissive Scene 01'

Looking forward to Part 2 (and Part 3 of course)

Liked the writing - but I am unsure about the plot.

_ Seems to have a true-story-might- happen-today setting. Topic are the first steps into BDSM for a new couple.

_ I like that the story elaborates on transition steps and character dynamics.

Might give 4/5 stars, because it's well done but not the-best-of-the-best, yet

But I do not know - as am a BDSM story reader, not a practitioner - if this is indeed realistic, especially from the sub's point of view. Could some pros comment, please?

Wonderful scene. Not too aggressive as are some of these stories.

Enjoyable, but a good proofreading is required.

Yeah, ok but is Ian truly a Dominant, he did fuck all and remained largely a passive observer allowing everyone else to use his wife. Indeed she arranged the entire scene behind his back. Surely cheating in my mind.

Looks to me that Ian is submissive as well, why wasn’t he up on the cross being thrashed and then fucked by Caitlin, Helen and Ron?

What true dominant share his wife?

That’s the real question, the answer is he’s is a sub as well.

3/5, see if it improves.