by Samuelx
Every story you write is the same bad plot with the same racist characters. It's like you're trying to change just enough to not get busted for copying in highschool. You need to find some new ideas or just plain quit.
Absolute garbage
Could you please try not introducing characters by the following format from now on?
<Full name><Race><Religion><Sex>
That would be great. Right now you sound like a stupid Mad Lipz version of a spambot.