All Comments on 'Naima - Exposed to Corporate Life Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
yes, please, more chapters

I was hoping that when her boss came in to watch, he would join in and fuck Naima's ass. Hope she gets ass fucked and multiple DPs in future chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Good story

I enjoyed it, well done

redlion75redlion75almost 7 years ago
Wrong

This belongs in the reluctance since they basically forced her to fuck for a job

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Room for so much more.

The story is hot and could have many chapters all around the loving wife and her discovery of real sex. If you decide to go on, make each chapter a story in itself. The part where husband finds out is a two parter. As she discovers the power of her sex she becomes dominant over him and he becomes a cuckold. Her family could find out. She could discover women or 18 year olds of either sex. List goes on and on. Let your inner pervert be your guide.

This is only a start for you so get to work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
☆☆☆☆+ (4.4/5.0 = 88% = A) THE STORY IS VERY EROTIC BUT ITS EROTICISM IS UNDERSTATED

I really liked the story.

Naima knows that in some situations a girl's gotta do what a girl's gotta do. She made a Faustian bargain. Her end of the deal was not that bad.

Yes, she did get humilated, but she is richer for a valuable experience. Once she realises that the sun also rises she will get over the shock.

Also what dod not kill her eill make her stronger.

Her husband will benefit from enjoying his now-IMPROVED BRIDE.

NAIMA IS A KEEPER!

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http://www.dictionary.com/browse/faustian-bargain

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Sun_Also_Rises_(1957_film)

https://en.m.wiktionary.org/wiki/that_which_doesn%27t_kill_you_makes_you_stronger#English

n_sentran_sentraover 6 years ago
well written

Amazing story. Well written. Please write CH 02

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Nice story

It's a good one, well balanced in terms of length. Keep it coming

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Great story

Pls continue your story.am enjoying it

Am Muslim by cast but i love to read our muslim girls fucked by non muslims uncut cocks and cheat there muslim husband

Pls dear writer submit u r another story about nimas experience with non muslim mans and make her hubby eat her cumfilled pussy unknowingly

BrindasethBrindasethabout 5 years ago
Good Work

You have created a nice character, as it began she has started her journey from Naive to Slut. Keep working on adding more shades and transition feelings.

Nice one. Thanks for sharing your story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
can do it better

you could have ralf seducing the lady followed by passionate love. then the story could have continued with more such corporate affairs with various clients, the lady climbing the top of corporate ladder and leaving her husband. this can become a series. try it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Nice one, hope to see you write more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Nice keep her working for the company and tell her that her husband won’t be told what she did as long as she continues. Then everyone can have a good time with her.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

What happens if she gets impregnated by the white man's seed?

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I wish what happened to Naima happened to my Indian wife who has to go on foreign business trips regularly. Maybe she is spreading her legs for her business deals (who knows)? I hope she enforces her sexual partners to wear condoms. DAMN! THIS STORY MADE ME SO HAAAARDD!! All is can think about is replacing Naima for my wife in my head - going at it with the bastard, Ralf!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Naima needs to have her asshole stretched with some more cocks

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Requesting writer for part 2 - Naima gets pregnant - all her colleagues get to taste her milk. Try to bring in a lesbian angle as well

9/10

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Hot!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Sexy!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Need more from this author.

AnonymousAnonymous22 days ago

9/10

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