by XtinaSmith2017
oh please continue - please . oh wow awesome this really gets my imagination going .your stories are always amazing . thanks for this installment.
Normally I'm not into the guy getting feminized, but this was done so tastefully and convincingly it's an instant fav.
The side commentary on him recognizing the twins by their freckles added just the right amount of personal touch to suspend disbelief and make it memorable.
Well done.
A big improvement from the first chapter. I like how you moved away here from being completely non-con to them still being manipulative and threatening but still feeling guilty about it and wanting to move toward a different end goal. I just hope that you'll do something with that in a following chapter where they'll sit down and have a real talk and where I hope they realize 'addicted to' doesn't equal 'in love with', and that maybe they shouldn't follow the same plan they had from the beginning. Don't get me wrong - I absolutely love the sex here, I'm just talking about the various manipulative machinations that it seems you've hinted is upcoming in future chapters.
Either way, I'm sure you'll do an amazing job as always moving forward. Love you :)
I loved how the girls progressed from totalnpredatory noncon to show tgeir loving romantic sides. As a gay woman I am just so deeply loving this story. Pleaze continue.
I love the way your write from the question "You don't like to kiss" To the little things you incorporate you are a gifted writer and hope you continue to write especially this series.
While i like the story, i would have prefered if he fought back once freed and then the decided to consensually become their boyfriend. Not this way
Of course you'd get comments criticizing the non-consent, but if you'd have put it there I'm sure you'd be criticism because it was a Trans story. I loved it. I just wish you'd continue the series because there's so much potential for emotional growth between these three characters. And they're all so endearing.
Thank you so much for sharing your amazing talent.
Awesome!! Loved all of it, from the seduction, the bondage, non-consent, forced bi, the way they took his ass and mouth to the make-up ... cum swapping. I’m so hard!!
Wonderfully done! While the domination of the first chapter had its own appeal, it seems that there is a chance for the adoring boy we met at the beginning to come back and be a key facet of an indulging boyfriend in, what I hope will be an ongoing occasional series.