by Pleasurewhore
While I skeeve a bit at the switching thing, your story is enjoyable, nonetheless. I like your style of jumping right in, rather than introducing your character with a lot of cumbersome details. You let us get to know them by what is going on. Well done on a hot story! Keep them coming... :)
MastersWench xx
I enjoyed your story but must admit I would not have enjoyed it as much if you had not written what was to come and the dangers involved. I think there are people that read to plan their scenes who may be quite new, so your warning is warranted. It also makes the story more intimate given the warning and the interactions you have.
Pleasure, this was one of the best written stories I have read in a long time. The build up was fast, but tastefully done. I could really see this happening.
This story is a sure fire way to excite anyone. It's fast paced and has all the action you could ask for. The way she keeps it so action oriented while having plenty of mindfucking is pretty astounding.