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"Shit." Margaret growled, barely able to conquer the rush. Anna pulled her fingers free and licked the juices before sliding them back deep.
"You're right. I could get used to tasting you. Maybe I'll just sit on you all night taking delectable licks." Margaret lifted an eyebrow in disbelief. Anna smiled before leaning in close. "Do you think I'm that mean? I don't tease. I conquer." Margaret's eyes widened as Anna lifted up and spread Margaret's legs wide. With Margaret's pussy open and exposed, Anna rammed her tongue into the sopping sex before her. Margaret let out a sharp yelp as Anna devoured every inch of her, leaving nothing pleasantly unmolested by her tongue. Margaret couldn't keep up and fell back into the bed, letting her have her way. Anna felt the relaxation and laughed victoriously before delving back between the spread legs.
"Damn girl you were holding back." Margaret hissed. Anna ignored her comment but doubled her efforts, driving Margaret into seventh heaven. She's perfect in every way. No one else can drive me this high so quickly.
"Come on sweet thing. I want your best tasting juice." Anna growled, sapping any reserves Margaret had. She covered mouth and screamed, her toes curling. Anna moaned and sucked hard, getting everything she could. Margaret's hands slapped the bed, her voice leaving her once Anna latched onto her nerve bud.
"I can't please I can't take it." Margaret gasped quietly. Anna continued her assault and Margaret legs shook as her climax grew. "Pllleease." Anna chuckled with her clit in her mouth and the vibrations sending her over the edge. Margaret let out a piercing howl, staring blankly at the roof. Her thoughts fell apart, her world spun, and the only thing she knew was that Anna was the best thing for her. Anna released her and Margaret sucked in a breath, keeping her senses. Anna crawled up with a well earned victorious grin. Margaret reached out and cupped her cheek. Anna moaned and kissed her palm before holding her hand to her cheek. They cuddled together under the blankets and held one another tightly before sleep captured them.
Margaret woke the later to the call that they had arrived in Vancouver. She reluctantly opened her eyes to a rainy day and fell back onto the bed. She glanced over and saw Anna stirring awake.
"I was having this wonderful dream that we had our own place and lived happily ever after." Anna said as her eyes opened. Margaret smiled and kissed her passionately. "I guess this is it." Margaret slouched but nodded. They got out of bed and saw their suitcases in the room. They dressed in jeans and shirts before packing their last belongings. They looked at each other and quickly embraced one last time. They parted and kissed before Margaret opened the door.
"I will never get over you, ever." Margaret said, turning back to her one and only. "I'll always love you and will never forget you."
"And I you love. If love is true then in time we will be together and when it happens I will never let go." Margaret kissed her and as their tongues met, the ship lurched to a halt, breaking their union.
"How does one say goodbye?" Anna whispered as their foreheads touched. Margaret sniffled and wiped her tears away. "Thanks." Anna added with a saddened chuckle.
"No goodbyes, never goodbye. I'll see you later, in my dreams." Anna smiled lovingly and kissed her soundly before pinching Margaret's bum. Margaret yelped before laughing. She returned the pinch and both laughed before Anna stepped away.
"Then I'll see you later my sweet for another love filled evening." Margaret leaned against the door as Anna walked out into the rain. She looked back one last time before disappearing below deck.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 year agoCaptain Midnight - Don't Apologize. Your instincts where right. This is just another man hating story disguised as lesbian love.
Captain Midnightalmost 11 years agoI apologize for the rant I posted. This story was a lot more complex and subtle than I thought. Please, forgive a sad man who lost his girlfriend to someone else (a man) and saw lost love under the bed.
Captain Midnightalmost 11 years agoDon't write any more of this. You changed Mark and Ben back and forth from good guys to rats too many times for me to count, and frankly once is too many times. Mark was perfectly within his rights to be furious with Anna and Margaret. The little bit about beaching Maria and what's-his-name, obviously created because Maria is homophobic, is trying to prove Maria is bad to the bone when she most definitely is not. I don't mind Margaret not wanting Ben to go off on a hunting trip to shoot animals -- I wouldn't do it either -- but one minute he hates the ship and the next he loves it, hoping Margaret will make love to him on board -- so what does she do but run right out the door? Margaret is quite right in believing she will lose both Ben and Anna when you know full well she can't have both and she absolutely must take Ben. There is only one way for this story to end up, with Anna and Margaret destitute and devastated, likely Ben amd Mark wealthy but just as devastated. And I'd like to see the captain face a board of inquiry for letting Anna and Margaret use his private space (yes, I know, but off limits is off limits and the captain should know that). No more.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoThere's an old adage that says you've got to catch your reader in the first paragraph. While it may not be exactly true, there is something to it. I found the first chapter hard to follow -- too many characters, not enough detail to differentiate them, and not enough character development to let me care to keep going. It might have developed into a great story, but there wasn't enough there to make me turn the "page."
