All Comments on 'Not What You Think'

by MSTarot

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
just WOW!

easily one of the best stories ive yet had the pleasure of reading on this site!

TX_Fun_DrTX_Fun_Dralmost 12 years ago
What a wild ride!

Thanks for such a great read! Makes me recall a line from Oliver Twist, "More Please. May I have more please?"

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
really good

that was a really good story

TimothyMTimothyMover 11 years ago
Unbelievably hot

This story got to me in so many ways that I wish I could vote more than once. The terse way you described the tragedies hitting this guy made me ache for him more than ten sentimental paragraphs would have done. And the dildo-without-lube moment made me laugh while at the same time clenching my butt in sympathy thinking ooouchh - and then suddenly cringing in embarrassment as he is found out. You also handled the incest angle very neatly. And I was so glad he got what he deserved in the end...

SoSpankMeXSoSpankMeXover 11 years ago
Amazing

I've had thoughts over the years about possibly taking a guy like that. Never had the guts to say it. This story goes and proves that there is always someone out there there, just as turned on by freaky shit as you. Well written and great job. May even have to reread a few times. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
1-45!

1. Damn!My (damn! my)

2. Some how (Somehow)

3. (-large) king size (king-size) mattress

4. it's plastic (its)

5. down stairs (downstairs)

6. anymore (any more)

7. grand parents (grandparents)

8. old ford (Ford)

9.fire fighters (firefighters)

10. (-a) many a night

11. near by (nearby)

12. some where ( somewhere)

13. Dads (Dad’s)

14. piss ant (pissant)

15. coroners (coroner’s)

16. sisters (sister’s)

17. every thing (everything)

18. my self (myself)

19. watched her slid it (slide)

20. down turned (downturned)

21. Laying (Lying)

22. get use to (used)

23. trobbing (throbbing)

24. bull dike (dyke)

25. your (you’re)

26. over looking (overlooking)

27. it's quite (quiet)

28. hand made (handmade)

29. on socks walked out the kitchen (POORLY EXPRESSED)

30. Hard wood (Hardwood)

31. bare foot (barefoot)

32. sat down (set)

33. he ass (her)

34. Lay down (Lie)

35. stretch out (stretched)

36. It's anything (it’s)

37. What ever (Whatever)

38. leaned down over me and places a gentle kiss (placed)

39. chained to the bed (handcuffed)

40. turned lose (loose)

41. Harder and then (-H) (h)arder

42. grins up and me (at)

43. now you the woman. (you’re)

44. ass hole (asshole)

45. feel bother her hands (both her)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Oh i wish

That i could find this woman. I do love to fuck an ass, have had one girl who really liked it but thought it was crazy that i wanted her to fuck me. Have had several guy's who liked to get fucked and would do me. It's just not the same as a girl doing it.

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