All Comments on 'Obedience'

A very arousing story. Thank you.

A moment in time captured. Well done. Five Stars. In many respects, more poem than short story.

Every father's dream whether they admit it or not.

5/5!!! SSS*

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*Short, Sweet, Sexy!

Nice to see a new offering from you, however brief. Excellent work.

Short but very sweet.

And yes, when one is feeling very lazy, that is a delightful way to take pleasure in a woman.

Alwaystaboo from over 2 years ago. The author did say at the beginning of this story that she doesn't promote or encourage incest, it's just that some Doms and subs will be asked to call him "Daddy" or "papa". I don't like this type of name calling by grown adults, makes me feel nauseous. However I am not American so don't understand it.