All Comments on '"Oh" Submission Town: Dutiful Mommy'

Thanks for another interesting chapter to this series. Can't wait for the next installment. Will it be Monday for the "housewives" club or something happening before then. Maybe when Cinthia comes home with one of her girlfriends or maybe another "pet" to surprise her mother and Lucy with.

sequels often are stale. .. but holy shit did u spice this one up. ..

hot as hell

the prior 1 but you did.Hell I hope the next part even tops this somehow.What an awesome mind you have but then who doesn't love a hot submissive mother story where she sucks off son and eats allot of pussy not just her daughter's which by itself is spectacular. This was not a 5 star story, it was a 10. LT

I am waiting with my pussy on fire for the afternoon gathering of the housewife club.You are an excellent writer. I am hot from page 1 and pussy soaked by page 3. Annbe60@gmail.com

Never stop your stuff RULES

Great story. Perhaps a return of the vibrating egg during sunday services (for perhaps multiple women) as a prelude to mondays clubmeeting

I am so wet! Please write more!

I loved this story from beginning to end.

I can't wait for the Monday meeting. I wonder what happens when the Reverend gets back. Is he going to get drawn in? Does he have a secret life? I Hope this goes on for several more chapters. As I came to the end I kept hoping there was just one more page.

She should carry her sons kid. The humiliation of it should drive her wild.

Read this and several of your stories last evening, you are hot and nasty. I wrote one called Avid's Education (3.85) I used to post here under Nasty Karl http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=123690&page=submissions Think about you writing Avid’s side of the story; I write User and you write the used. Anyway if you are interested post a comment on that story and I will get myself back on literotica. That e-mail address is long gone.

This was great!

I would love to be a sexual slut to my son and daughter in law

Your writing is addictive. I'm hard as ever.More soon please.

Can the daughter or the son seduce the father when he gets home? Then it could be a real family affair and Kimberly's being pregnant would not raise suspicion in the community or the church.

This story reminds me of my sister and I and relationship we have had for years

I AM CUMMING.

1 of the best stories (series) I've read so far, keep it up and can't wait for the next story.......

Hello anneb60@Gmail.com. Save your wet dripping pussy for me. Would love to devour every drop. Sit on my face .PLEASE.

Fingering and cumming while reading this oh fuck this was fucking hot babe

This is a great story from start to finish. Been stroking keeping myself on edge. Can't wait for the finish.

the story is great and can't wait for more.

Sure would like to Google the whereabouts of this little Town and move there immediately!

Oh so fucking sucking wonderful way out totally debauched, loved it, more and more please and soon. I have two luscious MILFs living close to me and we enjoy each other on a daily basis as much as is humanly possible plus we have three young ladies that join with us, all the women are bi and love depraved orgies. Sucking and fucking till we pass out with exhaustion, only to start over as soon as we recover. I absolutely adore cunt, lapping it and tounge fucking it and drinking as much cunt juice as possible, getting drunk on cunt, love watching the girls 69 and lapping up the cunt cream and licking and sucking my cream from each other's cunts.more More andMore please. Cunt lapping sex maniac, Lanc's UK.

Im pretty sure if I were there id have a harem too

Best thing I ever read in my life

this one got me off, but not your best writing. loved the submission, but it did lack in suspense, would I read it again? oh hell yes! ! ! just that I know SSL can write better, as I have read most of your stories, and never been disappointed.

Please. Please. Please.

I do hope to find the rest of this story here. I loved the first chapter to this chapter and I'm ready to read the next chapter.

This is so hot, please write another chapter!!

Housewives club please please please!

Loved the story. So well written too.

Very hot

I like the story line, but if your spelling, grammar, and sentence structures are as poor as your previous chapters. I will be bypassing any stories of yours in the future! With spell check and all on computers, there is no sense in these happening!

wondering who this character is that reads fifty stories and complains about sentence structure in each one. the only valid complaint would be the sudden finish of the story when there is enough material to write a book or 20 chapters. who is at this meeting ?

what are they going to do to each other, each of the women must have a story of how they joined the club and what do they enjoy about it, any other kinky interests, etc. please continue this story line...

Oh hurry with the next chapter

this is one of the hottest series I have ever read. Please consider a squeal.

Thanks. No really, thanks.

Another great one. Thanks very much.

Don't stop now! That's the best series I ever read. I don't score stories with five stars..ever! Until NOW! You got my first one.

Don't forget to break down old daddy preacher with his own daughters cunt! ;)

These is NO limit as to what you can do with this storie's out line. You have a whole town to get involved with them yet!! And ALL the town's kids too. Great idea!! Keep up the great work!

FUCKING AWESOME SERIES, BUT WHERE IS THE FINALE?? The monday night lesbian orgy?

I have loved reading this series. Would like to see it continue with the Housewifes Club meeting and to find out who else is owned by the daughter.

I’m a big fan of your work. You have an easy style that is highly erotic and fun to read...Keep up the great work!

now that i'm wet and dripping, i want to put a leash and collar on you and order you to lick my pussy clean and suck off my clit.

if you do a good job and make me come and squirt in your mouth, i'll strap on a thick 12" and nail all your fuck holes for as long as you want. ever ready, never limp!

I know this was an old story when I read it, but I couldn't help but wonder what would happen when the good reverend returns home. I'd love too see him forced to submit to his daughter, or maybe even both. it would be great to see him reduced to the bottom and what he would have to endure, like eating pussy and being ass-fucked. I'd also love to see what happens when Kimberly attends her first lesbian party as a cunt licking submissive. Lots of potential there. Otherwise, a great and hot story. 5*

while the story was intriguing, it seems incomplete. what happened on Monday, and what happened when the Minister husband/dad returns home?

Jasmine, this a masterpiece work of art, something that should be exhibited in an art gallery. Tasks are the key for Kimberly. A sequel of tasks in the church and community will be off the hook. Please consider.

I have never been a fan of incest, but the amazing seduction, blackmail, and submission really turned me on. These Submission Town stories were great, as are all of the stories by silkstockingslover. Much like the main submissive character, once I started, I could not stopped.

This story is just getting better, more please.

Jasmine, this is one of the all time best stories that has ever been written. You should get the adult stories version of the Pulitzer Prize for this one. I would love to read a sequel about Kimberly and the housewives club. You have been my favorite writer for years, and I am an educator too.

I realize my a "late to the table" kind of reader but I do want you to at least know that I was captivated by your writings. Your description of the erotic sexual acts drew me in completely. Please consider this a 'firm' request for a continuation of this series. Please, mistress! :)

Great series

The mother has become the pet of the pet, so far the only people who arent pets is Ben and the dad.

You have kept the twists and turns going. Want wait for what's next.

I have read a few of these stories, an interesting twist would be the mother become the mommy-pet and keeps trying to convince the daughter and boyfriend or brother to stop, then when they think she is totally obident. Maybe after the male has been sodamizing he and she is going down on the daighter. They both com on her face. They laugh at mommy-pet. Then she reaches up grabs both by their hair and turns the table. Starting a new chapter where they serve as her pets.

Jasmin Thank you again. I’ve run out of complements to give you so I’m just going to put my K London mark on each of your great stories I have read.. each one is absolutely outstandingly good.. K.. London

Great story and hopefully the next chapter will be finished soon

I loved this story so sexy I love reading about mommy being turned and then dressing for sex, I love when she wears nylons and the boots were awesome, especially being slutty hooker boots.

I really like how mommy gets off on verbal abuse and sucking cock after it has been in her ass or somebody elses ass, I love it.

frend

Love the mommy submissions.

I really enjoy the stories and series I have read of yours so far

You are the mistress of beautifully erotic stories. Regardless of the topic, this being hot sex dripping incest, you create such sexually descriptive accounts.

You are my favorite sex writer.

If Ben is going to be dicking them all, why would he not also be there?

I want more chapters! What happens on Monday afternoon when she meets the lesbian group? What happens when her husband gets back from his trip? Give us more!!!

I was aroused more with each line,I read

To turn the preacher's wife, into a full slut. Submissive, another major turn on

I look forward to seeing more.

Absolutely loved this story, sucking fucking wonderful along with liberal use of the word Cunt.

Sex is all about the four Cs, Cock, Cunt, Clit and Cum. I adore Cunt in every way, eating one Cunt while fucking another while finger fucking two more at the same time, the more I get the more I want. Just keep at it till we all pass out from the insane level of sexual pleasure generated and the dirty talk. Jasmine you just get better and better. Cunt lapping sex crazed fucker, Lanc’s U.K.

Loved it when next part coming

would love to see a conclusion to this story Ma'am

Grate stuff. Tots of ways to go. Would love to read more.

Love the series hope there is more to come.

This was fabulous. Please more. This has so much great, fun and hot potential!!

What are best friends for? Looking forward to more.

Jaz, it's been years! We'd like the next chapter of this story to witness.

Fucking hot!

As said in the previous comment, I'm hoping to read more of this series to include uptight Dad with daughter AND with son!

Getting better and better

Loved this series. Great development of characters. Being uncut colle Ted heap of precum in my hood. Hope to read more.

Jasmine, consider writing a sequel in which Kimberly is given assignments to seduce the wholesome wives in the church and establish a mother- daughter’s club there.

This was a great story..I was feeling like the son and was fucking the ladys myself.. Wish I was able to write a story about what I enjoy doing,,, It might be a good read....

Jasmine, this is a world class series worthy of the Pulitzer Prize. Please consider a sequel.

Jasmine, would so enjoy another sequel of tasks for Kimberly.

Omg Jasmine, just had to read this again, I am so for Cunt right now, as my girls are away at the moment, back tomorrow thank god. You know that I absolutely adore Cunt in every way possible, especially when I am eating one and fucking another, sometimes e en fingering a third. I am so fucking greedy for Cunt and Cunt juice. I have milf neighbour coming round this afternoon, she is 23 and red hot and loves it when I push an electric but plug switched to full on up her ass on the cum stroke of my cock in her cunt,it blows both our minds and we pass out for about 20 mins before we can go again. Cunt crazed fucker, Lancashire, UK. Omg why would I not give to do you like this Jasmine you beautiful sex crazed cunt.

Want more of ben and his sister

The daughter just ruins every story. The son and mom were hot, indeed raw lust and feelings. When he was not name calling her, just mom or mommy it was insanely hot. Hairdresser and principal were sexy. Lucy started out hot, but then it became absurd. No woman will shove a dirty heel in her cunt, toy shoes are inside shoes or at least clean shoes. Just like the horrible anal sex without prep on a person who never before had anal. Who didn't clean and then will likely suck on shitty dick...bleh...that's how std's happen and also it tastes horrible.

Too many individuals. In my opinion it should just have been sister, mom and son and neighbor and all of them throughly ass fucked.

That was delightful, a nice mix of elements from start to finish, believable characters, and interesting development of Kimberly's submission from start to finish. I think you struck a good balance between fantasy and realism - we all know what works and what doesn't in real life, but this is fiction, after all, the narrative should take precedence.