All Comments on 'On My Couch'

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FullCircle56FullCircle56almost 11 years ago
Nice Flash Story

Too funny. I think you need to write a sequel for this one. Only post it in Loving Wives or should that be "Loving Future Wife to be?"

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Yes I have to agree with FullCircle56 :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
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...Couldn't get past the 'caught her elbow and pressed a pressure point to make her arm go numb.' If you don't actually know how fighting works, then don't go into such silly details about it. 'Pressure points' don't work like that, this isn't Star Trek.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Cool story.

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