by Ashson
Too funny. I think you need to write a sequel for this one. Only post it in Loving Wives or should that be "Loving Future Wife to be?"
...Couldn't get past the 'caught her elbow and pressed a pressure point to make her arm go numb.' If you don't actually know how fighting works, then don't go into such silly details about it. 'Pressure points' don't work like that, this isn't Star Trek.