On The Train Ch. 05

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Part of me wanted to do a backflip of joy, but it was a very small part. The prospect of having to be around those two sexy, voluptuous, younger copies of their mother, and treat them as family, was one I had dreaded. It worried me, as I didn't want to hurt Samantha, and could see how easily things could get out of hand. Now, that danger had been diffused, and while I wasn't planning on immediately bedding the girls, it made that possibility a whole lot more appealing. Still, I wondered what had driven Sam to make that conclusion.

"Sam, honey, I don't know what to say. Why?" I asked her.

"Oh god, I don't know!" she giggled, exasperated. "Like I said, I'd like to keep you to myself, and I'd hope that I'm enough for you, but the fact remains unavoidable. You're so young, and I'm not."

"You felt pretty young today... skipping work, blowing me in a public place, while someone watched, getting tied to the bed, and taking it in the ass," I countered, and watched her blush at the recap.

"Yes, it was fun, every bit of it, but we both know every day can't be like that," she explained. "I guess I'm just trying to look after all possibilities. Frank hurt me, badly, by cheating... There's no excuse for his behaviour, but it did make me think about things differently. In the end, I decided it wasn't so much the sex with other women that hurt me, as it was the lying. The deceit and disrespect are what really hurt."

"I would never do that to you," I told her.

"I know, I know, and that's part of it. You're a good and honourable man. That's why I love you, among other reasons," she smiled, pressing her body against mine and giggling happily. "As long as I know about it, it's okay with me. Today, with the mirror up there, was like seeing you with someone else, in a way. It's actually kind of hot. I wouldn't mind watching."

So, that's how the best day of my life got even better. We talked a little bit more, but the brandy did eventually claim Samantha, and she slept in my arms peacefully, leaving me to mull over the possibilities.

And what possibilities they were, but I think that's another story.

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Thanks for waiting, and for reading. I think we have another chapter or two with this group, but this is a good place to pause, and catch up with some others.

Shall it be Grace and Brian? Savannah and Nick? Brosie and Hank?

I'll start work, and you tell me your choices.

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MardracMardrac5 months ago

Need to come back and work on all your series please!!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

They had worries and concerns and they actually had a nice conversation about it to resolve the issues. You don't see that much in these stories I'll admit. Usually one or both run off and do something stupid, creating heaps of drama and heartbreak, sometimes ending up back where they started but now having enough sense to fix what they should have back then. I appreciate you made these two take the common sense approach, which is what everyone should do in these kinds of situations.

I'm disappointed you ruined it a bit with the whole "you have permission to fuck my daughters" near the end. You were doing so damn well up until then. I guess in the end you're really no better than most of the authors out there that just can't resist a bit of group fucking included, for whatever reason. It completely shits all over the entire story if he's going to fuck other people. She should have more fucking faith in their relationship long-term and he shouldn't be so happy at her saying what she said.

On that note, one other thing I would have changed about this story is that Samantha should have been able to get pregnant. I think them having a child of their own would have been a nice thing to add to the story. It would have also avoided the need for that stupid daughter fucking thing.

Anyway, given that this part was last updated like 7 years ago, it's best that it's left alone before you destroy the great story you've built thus far. The second he gets it on with another woman, the romance aspect is dead and it's just another group fuck story, like we need more of those. If you do feel compelled to add more chapters, please for the love of fuck, don't get the daughters involved in any sexual way. Keep it all about Sam and Alex.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

There is scope for another chapter involving Alex and Samantha's marriage, followed by the tasteful involvement of both lovely daughters sharing equally in an open and loving joint family relationship.

NitpicNitpic8 months ago
Reasonable

Reasonable story spoilt by the over abundance of sex scenes.

coigachboycoigachboy9 months ago

The ending feels as thought there could be at least one more chapter that could be added.

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