by magmaman
I like the twist you put into the story about Danny getting Kathy pregnant at the age of 65. Again hardly wait to read the next chapter and how the daughter-in-law reacts to this news. Keep writing
of the first chapter's info, but still quite enjoyable with a couple of nice twists at the end... thanks for writing it.
Well written but for most of the story, I wondered why you bothered. It seemed like a rewrite of part one, but the twist at the end made it worthwhile.
this second part almost as much as the first.The characters seem to be real people.Lokking forward to part 3,from one of the best authors on this site.
As is always the case, the relatives want to get involved. But I want to read the next chapter! I like the way you twisted the end of this chapter. I fully expected the girl to go back to her first husband. Thanks for writting this one too!
I have to say, if you were looking for a revenge plot against Bill and the daughter-in-law, you couldn't come up with anything better. The daughter-in-law will freak when she hears of the baby and marriage. I laughed thank God I wasn't drinking anything when I read that. What will Bill's reaction to a child be I wonder? Not good, he may be a good father to his children but that does not make him a good person. Bravo.
I hope you don't have her fuck around with the ex - it would ruin a really nice story lol