All Comments on 'Our Sex Vacation Day 3'

She mumbled, "I hope your right" and drifted off to sleep."

How can a "writer" NOT know the difference between "you're (the contraction for "you are") and "your?" That's just an example folks. This story was written by someone who does not understand simple grammar and someone who has no idea of how to punctuate a short sentence.

Nightie, old fellow, quit embarrassing yourself. Learn how to write before submitting stuff like this.

Fantastic story and I don't care about the grammer. This was a hot story and we both loved it.....Twice!