All Comments on 'Paradise by the Dashboard Light'

I know it's not the best way to praise a story here, but first and foremost it's a pleasure to read one from this forum that could essentially go straight to a printer. Spelling, syntax, pacing, plot, grammar, are all virtually perfect. Might need some tightening up in editing, but that would be of a personal preference nature.

Took awhile before I realized her intent- I really did think she was trying to get him into a power nap!

Exellent read. Great characters, dialogue and plot.

Hee! I like Hannah, she's clever. :D