All Comments on 'Pathways Ch. 13-14'

by coaster2

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
5-Stars -Thank You Again

I’m going in for eye surgery today. Hope I can read tomorrow, but may have to catch up next week. Keep up the good work and thank you again.

LeFrog08LeFrog08over 6 years ago
Another great series.

Coaster2 keeps delighting me,

series after series. Thanks, man.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great

Your usual first class story.

Thanks

Boyd Percy

gemman1gemman1over 6 years ago
Fantastic Story

Your usual first class writing. Great Story, I look forward to the next one. thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Excellent! -5 Stars

I hope you've got more stories in the pipe line.

bruce22bruce22over 6 years ago
As ever excellent and interesting work

There could have been more pathways in this story. One thing I have noticed is that

you rarely use direct competition for the girl..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Absolutely one of your best. As real to life as life itself.

There are a lot of good people in this world. Somehow they manage to find a circle of friends and relatives as Deb and her mother have. I admit to reading this story four times and find something new each time. Thank you Coaster !!

Rancher46Rancher46over 3 years ago

This is a great romance story. I love how the author told the story of Ian's youth, of his growing up his first infatuation with Bernie, then the move to Vancouver and drama of Ian's education, especially with Deb who took his virginity, then finding his new career and realizing that his true love was in fact Deb. Always enjoy the happily ever after. Story was well written and the character development was wonderful.

Well done coaster2, 5 stars

servant111servant111over 2 years ago

God your stuff is just sooooo good!! You have the romance story down perfect!

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