All Comments on 'Patrick Ch. 02'

Women like Melissa are difficult to deal with. She is spoiled and wants what she wants! Maybe he could turn his class over to someone else but continue to try to see Kevyn.

I'm so loving that Patrick found his mate in Kevyn. He's going to have a hard enough time just trying to explain what he is and where he comes from. Then Melissa the stalker trying to make a huge pay day isn't going away. I'm telling you life is just sometimes hard but then females that think they are hotter than you want to be all THE QUEEN HAS ARRIVED! now that pisses me off. I'm so hoping that Patrick can keep it in his pants and away from Melissa.

If that Bitch died I would not cry(:

Your one of the best writers on lit., I hope to continue to read your work. You keep me wanting more of each of your stories. Keep it up and send more chapters quick, please.

I cannot stand a thirsty bitch! If he is not interested in you, let it go!!! It's too many men out there to be hung up on one that doesn't want you!

love it cant wait for more!!!

compel Melissa to behave or Kevyn could give her a bead down. Anyway you decide to play it is alright with me!

Melissa is nuts. Doesn't she realize some men hate desperate woman. She needs to move on to her next mark.

I'm really enjoying this story Melissa is really getting on my last nerve though I want her so out of the picture and soon but of course that's too good to be true right now so something has to be done to keep her at bay looking forward to see what happens next please update again real soon thanks!

As for Melissa, how about letting Keyvn beat the stupid out of her THEN Patrick compels her to forget him, Kevyn, the beatdown AND her quest to land a rich guy. LOL

I'm glad that Patrick is talking to his brother about this. Temptation is as bad as a casual indulgence, especially where Melissa is concerned.

On to chapter 3!!!

~Bluegardenia

how they are connecting and not realizing it on Kevyns' end. Good that she has a backbone and can stand up for her man-though she does not know that he is her man yet.

Where's the beef?