All Comments on 'Petting Party Ch. 03'

same story as the last, with add ons - but they seem like different characters, esp the main, with a different "voice".

showing off your writing skill? grin.

Good,smoth,and beliveable great writing keep up the good work Thanks, jimray.

You touched with feelings upon the realities of life and its consequences in this chapter.

Very nicely done - more please - Regards

This story is very, very intiguing. Lori and you need to really think about a sibling for your firstborn, and while you and Sharon are husband and wife again, and Sammi is a new baby with a half-sibling Ray, you should be able to add Lori into the fold as a live-in lover with Sharon's blessing inasmuch as she knows that Ray is yours with Lori. If you handle this story right, you should be able to form a continuation with it that is very common sensed, and erotic. I thin we need to see a lot more in this one, if you don't mind...

This story is very, very intiguing. Lori and you need to really think about a sibling for your firstborn, and while you and Sharon are husband and wife again, and Sammi is a new baby with a half-sibling Ray, you should be able to add Lori into the fold as a live-in lover with Sharon's blessing inasmuch as she knows that Ray is yours with Lori. If you handle this story right, you should be able to form a continuation with it that is very common sensed, and erotic. I thin we need to see a lot more in this one, if you don't mind...

A great story with a happy ending. very realistic loved it

Why did he wait 10 years? At least happiness was found again.

Thanks for writing!

Sexmate

You had it all but you were too stupid to see it. What better opportunity to become the unlawful husband to both Lori and Samantha and daddy to all the kids. You could have started fucking and living naked until Kingdom cum!

But it feels like more trouble to come -

Break hearts? Quit it, already! Take yer 5*