All Comments on 'Photo Shoot'

Your writting is very impressive.

Once again, your vivid imagination, inherent Sexiness, and ability with words has left me desiring you. For isn't that what EVERY writer here wants? You do it WELL!!

Wonderful story! Then I find your bio ~ gorgeous, tall, beautiful in mind and spirit...ahhh This writer truly is a glimpse of heaven...

Your husband is a lucky man, I wish I was the one giving some inspiration and encouragment for your stories.

Excellent story, yet to let me down. keep up the great work, looking forward to the next one

wow,nice work.... please write more on "1 yr of living together n sex" before the plane comes back.... and why her... will be looking out for it...

Christie, what a great story! I think it's amazing the way you have the photographer coax the girl into such a vulnerable position where she has no choice but to lie back and take it. Very erotic!!!!

well?

strixca@hotmail.com

There is something about how you describe rape that makes me want to be raped! You are such a turn on. I want to be impregnated by a loving raw stranger. - Dana

I swear, your writing is *WONDERFUL*. I'm able to envision myself as the one in your stories! I've read almost all of your submissions on this site, & so far, I've not been disappointed! Keep up the good work, and I'll keep on reading!!! :)

I can only concur with the compliments of the previous contributors. You are certainly a talented writer

I loved your story and would love to see a continuation of it also.

Great story! Please continue it. As a suggestion you could describe Christie's relationship with Jon during her pregnancy and her eventual marriage to him

I would like to offer you some ideas to continue this great story. Christie gets pregnant as a result of this experience. She is living with Jon who is taking care of her during her pregnancy because she is unable to return to the mainland as Jon stated. While living with Jon she and Jon get to know more about each other through mutual sharing of their lives and experiences. In time Christie falls in love with Jon and discovers that he is actually the man she was always looking for in life and was destined to marry She also begins to love his child she is carrying in her belly. Christie and Jon marry shortly afterwards. When the baby is born she names him Jon also. She lives the rest of her life with Jon and the baby as a happily married wife and mother. She also has more children by Jon. This time it is by mutual consent.

Know it's been a long time since it's been updated, but I kinda hope you come back to this story. Would love to see how it progresses.

This would be fantastic start to a series pls please please

Looks like the start of a long life together raising a family for christe and jon

Christie should make sure that he doesn't make it for the planes return.

Christies impregnation will begin her submission to Jon

Jon's seed will begin growing in Christies belly soon. I hope Jon arranged for Christie to get obgyn services during the course of her pregnancy and for the safe birth of the child. I believe the story should be continued..What was the relationship like with Jon during the course of Christies pregnancy. Do she and Jon marrying? Does she have have more children by Jon?

Now that was quite a twist to the story.

I was really looking forward to the part where he was sent to gaol for a VERY long time.