by HeyAll
Thank you for such a splendid tale of mother son loving. I hope you continue this tale as mother and son rutt like wild animals and have orgasm after orgasm as they embrace the taboo. I hope this son gets to take his mother in the shower, bending mommy over the bathroom sink, or perhaps doggy style in the hotel bed. I hope this loving son continues to seed his mother pussy over and over until finally his mothers belly swells with their love child. Well done and five stars from me.
This is a repost of one of my older stories. I've changed it to 3rd person along with other edits.
I hope you've all enjoyed reading. Thanks.
Heyall
I particularly liked that comment that all of the tribe members at the initiation ceremony were over 18 years old. Talk about a cultural hang-up.
I was looking for this story a few weeks ago and couldn't find it. I love the changes. Great job!
As I was reading this, I knew I had read it before, but still found it very erotic and exciting. Yes
Well done!
I'm as hard as Brian.
Please Tell.
Is BRIAN HARD? HOPE HE AND MOM GET IT ON AGAIN
PLEASE ADD ANOTHER EPISODE
Yes, sometimes Literotica's rules really put a clumsy break in a story. Much more likely a native tribe would start having sex much earlier.
Great job. I like that it didn't take 4 pages to get to the good stuff. Keep it up!
I enjoyed your story. Maybe we will see another chapter to it?
But what I don't get. I read a few of these stories and wrote a couple of my own. I am not a writer by no means. But I saw how everyone wrote theirs. So I done the same thing. But my stories were denied because of the exact same puntuations as I saw in your story. I don't get it.
all for science.... lol, great read. this could easily be expanded. thanks... for another out of the park homerun
Nice build up. Great dialogue. Very creative. Very exciting. Well done.
Well written, a sequel will be wonderful.
Ps : I prefer first person story, where may I find your old version ?
This story rocks ,read manhood rites. Thanks for the read
Great premise with unique outcome. Enjoyed the read. Looking forward to more stories.
The odor of sex is unmistakable, especially in a small plane. They would have had to pop open a window or vent (newer ones don't have that ootion). Other than that and her supposedly not knowing what the drink is (a number of cultures have aphrodisiac concoctions used for fertility rituals), it was a pretty good story.
I've read several stories about mom sitting on son's lap. But they were all in a car. This is the first one on a plane. Wow! Very erotic, though surprising that the pilot didn't smell the distinctive odor of sex in that small confined space in the plane. Maybe he had anosmia?!! But you could have continued the story a little more. After all the potion's potency might have lasted for a few days. So they could have experimented with all sexual positions, and in all her holes.