All Comments on 'Possessing Bella Ch. 05'

This was interesting. I am mor in love with Stephen, but I'm not sure what I think about Hunter. Also, I wish that Bella would be able to be on her own some. Roll on new chapters. I can wait until next month, though, now that I've had two chapters in a row to tide me over.

Several spelling errors.. needs fixing and a new editor

Well if you know of a good editor by all means get them to contact me :)

Seems they are few and far between as are beta readers.

I really, really cannot wait until Stephen and Bella get, together! Yum, just imagining it... !! Funny feeling that he will up her Master. Loving this new story, like seeing different aspects involved. Keep up the great writing.

Thank you for adding another wonderful chapter to Possessing Bella! I'm a fan of Sir Stephan... I hope at some point he gets to have some hardcore time with Bella.

Seems more like they are just going to pass her around than actually teach her anything

Begging that Sir Stephen will have his time with Bella, as her master. He seems alot like Mel but in his own way which I respect. Feeling hot and needy here when I think of Stephen and Bella. Keep up the good work.

I absolutely live the way Bella's character is evolving!

When are the next chapters cuming

I love the direction your stories are taking!! Absolutely yummy! And I disagree with the previous comment- no one is passing Bella around. She's learning SO much, as are they! I agree with the hopes that Sir Stephen will get a turn with her, or perhaps they will end up together. He's so protective of Bella, just like Mel was.

I gave this chapter my first 5 stars. I rather like the idea of a sub being a pet. I was horrified to see Tuan. He struck me as one who would relish damaging a sub. Hunter is experienced and seems that he would care for a sub while not necessarily being gentle. I hope after all the training Bella and Stephen will get together. In a former chapter a biker followed the car. Extra security or a danger?