by xelliebabex
I loved gaining further insight into Bella's thoughts this chapter. Especially in regards to her feelings toward each of her masters and how they compare to Mel. Its nice to see the story progressing as it has.
I'm curious to see what plans Bitang and Jayce have for Bella as well, though knowing they are more unsavory characters, I expect it won't bode well for our protagonist.
I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
Thank you for this chapter, I've been checking daily of late for my Bella fix! As usual wonderful, thoughtful and imaginative. Keep up the good work!
I wish I were bella. Thanks ellie for another wonderful chapter. More soon is all I can hope for. You are the best. m
Thanks for this wonderful episode in the life of Bella.
Can’t wait to read the next instalment.
You’re a very talented writer.
Thanks for sharing this talent with us.
Wonderful! Nice to see how she is comparing the Masters with what she wants to achieve as well. I am going to be on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter.
Please hurry with the next chapters
I was so pulled into the stories, I read everyone of them over the weekend.
Thank you for the great read
Just sending a big thanks Ellie. Love the series and thank you for sharing it with us :)
i wish i was Bella, in so many ways
i miss my time as a precious pet and submissive
i have read all 37 chapters (all 3 series) twice now, while waiting on pins and needles for the next chapters...hope they come soon, please and thank you
thank you for sharing...
You've done a superb job again! I am loving this adventure Bella is on and hope she finds her way to the right Master ( I personally am still rooting for Stephan). I cannot wait to read more. While I understand the end is in sight for young Bella's story, I hope the last chapters are not too hurried simply for the sake of finishing the series. You Truly Are Talented.
**patiently waiting for more**
I do hope to see this story finish out. I am too invested to let it go without a conclusion. I believe that you will deliver the best chapters yet. (no pressure) Please do not rush them just to finish. It would be an injustice to Bella and your wonderful ability as a writer. Thank you for creating a story that had me immersed from the very beginning..
so invested in the stories of 'Bella'...(no pressure) but can't wait for the next chapters, not wanting the story to end. I've re-read the stories so many times now...the fantasy, hopes...right now if you put all the qualities into one man - WOW!!!! Bella is going to have a hard time, from what I've read right now, picking a new Master, my heart will break for Stephen who seem so in love with her, if it isn't him....looking forward to more :-)
Love this story ellie. Trying to wait patiently like the rest. When will we be seeing the next chapter?
Love the stories - just posting like everyone else to lend encouragement to the creative thinking :)
Apologies again I am working on it slowly, life has not been kind of late. The next chapter is coming :)
Thank you so much . It is awesome and I love you have put places that I know in it ! I look forward to the next chapters :)
Now that I have read all there is to this point, I must say that the story line is superb. The writing and editing has improved greatly. You are very talented and knowledgeable. You must be very experienced or very well read, or both! I look forward to the completion of this epic tale. But, as others have stated, please continue with the same quality and do not rush to the end. I eagerly, but patiently, await the continuation of Bella's story. Keep up the great work!
After having read your beautiful story up to this episode and having provided so many comments, I find myself completely out of words to praise you. It is simply fantastic, I know that you have used a lot more words than I have and hope that you will continue to do so.