All Comments on 'Possessing Bella Ch. 23'

Well done with this chapter, and can't wait for the next.

I started reading and was happy that all the girls were getting together; the gift Dorothea had designed was a nice touch to the group. I'm surprised Dianne hasn't figured out that you can't move so fast with Bella, that she needs time to process somethings. Then the BeastMaster, thinking he could take off and force Bella to go with him, I was glad to see her stand up for herself. I was angry at Stephen, she was opening her heart to him, and he didn't let his hard shell down - instead he kept cold. :-( ... I don't think Bella expected things to go the way they did with Josie - I feel she may have had other fantasies about it. Can't wait to see what happens next ...

Great job

MC

Good to see bella say "no"

Thank you

A wonderful chapter that the story needed. And I still hope Bella and Steve end up beeing together.

Thank you ellie, yet another amazing chapter :)

Please can we have the last two chapters? I don't care if they're unedited. Please please please.

The next chapter is already there and the last one should be up tomorrow :)

You let Bella stand up for herself, several times. Oh, rapturous joy!

I was a bit proud of Stephen that he kept his distance, even if it is more his ego speaking than any consideration for Bella. I liked what Bella told Stephen. That goes to the crux of my struggle with the story - who, what, where is BELLA? You have had her travel such a convoluted road of experiences with such little insight to what has happened inside Bella. It feels as though we are finally being rewarded.

Then you had to check off the FF and watersports boxes, sigh. Not my things. You did, however, very clearly give Bella a choice about participating, and for that I thank you.

I was really struggling after the last chapter and considered leaving a comment...however others had already highlighted my concerns so why repeat. I was so concerned that Rob was going to force himself on her - and not allow her the opportunity to really explore who she wanted to be with.

I love this chapter - so much of the Bella that I knew was in there and it appears that she has finally grown up and at times having more insight than her guardians. She's finally found her voice and expressing her needs and desires. Although, I wished she would have voiced more of her concerns regarding Josie during the scene.

Your ability to write her journey has truly been breathtaking! I'm so sorry to see this coming to an end.

I've been waiting for a hot FF scene for a while and you didn't disappoint!. Even though I was hoping Bella would've been suffering under the control of Dianne it was still HOT!

As the lesbian that I am, I am so looking forward to that weekend! Hope Bella will more than consider it. Wow, I loved this chapter very much, thank you!

I’ve been waiting for Josie vs. Bella for so long! It didn’t disappoint!!

Bella admits that she has "fallen in love" with Stephen. I love how you just dropped that in there. If I'm not mistaken this is a first. She has said that she loves him many times, but, before now, never "in love." Thank you for another action-packed, erotic chapter.