All Comments on 'Prickteaser Pays The Price'

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he could have used what he knew to have her anytime he wanted.

so what does he do?

probably turns her into a super-vindictive heartless bitch.

glad I'm not him, because he's a dead man walkin'.

I have to agree with anonymous, this even though a good short story, felt like it could have gone farther. There was so much he could have done to her or have her do to him at his whim and he threw it all away.

Not the road I would have taken with a story like this, and after seeing all of your submissions, surprised you took this route. Seems like you would have taken it so much further, he had her right where he wanted her out of fear of repercussion from Daddy. Way too short with so much potential to build this not into a lengthy tale, but one of more.... just More!

I'm just a deviant old bastard and I know how I would have handled that situation knowing she was the school prick tease. She'd have had my cock for breakfast, lunch and dinner and so many more moments in between where she still could have been viewed by classmates as a slut, but I still would have gotten more than my fair share of rich pussy!

After a very promising start, I felt the author sold the story short with a quick ending. He could have made her suffer far more during the week, prior to the final party.

The piece of shit " boyfriend" got his too! The two big-dicked jig-a-boos found a trace to his uploading the scene to the internet and making it easy for Julie's daddy to learn their identity. Right before daddy's goons came to beat the ever-living shit out of them,they cornered our hero and made him airtight,firing huge loads in his mouth and ass.

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i would sent her home to daddy with baby in her never know who was the father