by Ashson
Dear Ashson,
I have written to you privately about this matter in the past, as the rule I try to follow is: "Praise in public, criticize in private." Yet, you have never even had the courtesy of writing back. Hence, the title of my comment. I have read some of your works that show a great deal of excellence, but this one isn't one.
Sincerely,
Glenn
I loved the story overall-only wished it was longer-and laughed my head off at the end! Great! Thank you! I'll be smiling all morning.
And i mean the girl in the story not actually learning yet as well. If anything, shell start asking for sex all the time, from experience.